Ugh. We get to see some Spuffy loving, nice and wild ... then he pulls his you're too young? Please tell me that she just kept interrupting him before he could really tell her that she's too young, but he can't change how he feel sabout her? Please have him chase her down. Please don't let Buffy walk or run away from her first time being with a man like this. It can really mess you up for life when something like that happens. The first can leave an impression on you that you'll never forget, especially if it is bad. Know that one from personal experience, unfortunately. Look forward to the next update. I hope it is soon.

Oooooo -- craziness, can't wait for more!! : ) Angel is soooooo gonna kill Spike!

i love it but i hate it at the same time. i love that, that had happened but i hate that he wont except that there ment to be together. i love the story please update soon. thanx.

Holy wow, what a chapter!! Steamy and then.... dang Spike! “Too young to be with, but not too young to fuck,” -- Harsh line, but much needed. Good job! Really enjoyed this chapter! Update soon!

Oh man, the nerve of Spike! Let's just take her virginity and call it a mistake - poor Buffy! Anyway, I was going to rant about how evil you are but I already did that in the other review, lol, so please hurry and update!

Woo-hoo! Hot, delcious, crazy, sexy, beautiful chapter! Love the anger that morphs into crazy, frantic sex. So wonderfully hot, sexy, moving. I knew Spike would regret it afterwards, but damn it was hot during. Very, very incredible complication to an already messy situation. Love the additional angst of Spike regretting taking Buffy's virginity too. The moment when he pulled back after he realized it was just priceless. I can't wait to see the morning after between these two. Buffy's "Fuck you" was perfect! It sounds like she is getting sick and tired of hot/cold Spike. Wonderful, amazing chapter Ashlee!

that... that...jerk. how could he? that is so not fair to poor buffy. please more, with lots of groviling from spike. he better make this right. great story can't wait for more.

aww.. Spike's being a jackass.. lol but, still, loved it.. hope they get together and hope there would be serious consequences for spike.. thanks..

I love this story, it's such a great orginal idea!

Whoa. Intense. Way to go!

one of the best chapters yet!

I knew Angel was going to ride in on his white horse and try to fix things! Arrrgh. I loved the point Buffy made about his raping and killing for over 100 years. Buffy is trying to grow up. It's not like she's doing drugs or having sex with all the boys. She's a good girl who deserves to be trusted and given a little space. If I had had to grow up in a box like they are keeping her, I would have rebelled too. It's tough enough finding your own way growing up, but to have to do it without any parents is extremely hard. I think your Buffy is doing a great job. Wonderful chapter again. Love the way Spike supported Buffy against Angel and went after her when she walked out. Can't wait to see if Buffy is willing to stand up to Angel and communicate her resentments.

great update