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Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/08/2012 - 03:50 am Title: The End

This was really good, especially the beginning. Seemed to lose its way a bit at the turning point (when Willow did the reversal spell), and the climax (at the Intiative) was also quite muddled. Spike & Buffy were so unforgivable, I'm not sure it could have believably been resolved so quickly. Also, seems odd not to have looped back around to Willow to figure out the order of things, and to make clear to all the characters which things were spell-related and to what extent. Dialogue was good, especially the first half, and especially with Spike. Promising writer, just needs some polish to tighten up plot.

Reviewer: mycroftacd Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2010 - 01:57 am Title: Chapter Thirteen

I like long storys and I really wanted to like this one and did like the earier parts. But I just can't see Spike acting this way and I don't wat to see him treating Buffy that way. I watched enough of Joss pulling that crap and didn't enjoy it then.

Reviewer: Astoria Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2008 - 07:00 pm Title: The End

Haha.

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Date: 06/23/2008 - 06:54 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen

Aww....

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Date: 06/23/2008 - 06:50 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

.... what happens next....

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Date: 06/23/2008 - 05:49 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

Buffy saw them. What'll she do?

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Date: 06/23/2008 - 05:46 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen

:(((((

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Date: 06/23/2008 - 05:42 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

Aww....

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Date: 06/23/2008 - 05:42 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

Aww....

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Date: 06/23/2008 - 05:38 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen

Poor Buffy. But the spacing was weird.

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Date: 06/23/2008 - 05:23 pm Title: Chapter Twelve

Poor Buffy.

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Date: 06/23/2008 - 05:14 pm Title: Chapter Eleven

I hope Cordy is in this fic.

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Date: 06/23/2008 - 04:53 pm Title: Chapter Nine

Poor Buffy.

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Date: 06/23/2008 - 04:14 pm Title: Chapter Eight

I wonder what she's going to do....

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Date: 06/23/2008 - 04:01 pm Title: Chapter Seven

Does he? :)

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Date: 06/23/2008 - 03:53 pm Title: Chapter Six

Poor Buffy.

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Date: 06/23/2008 - 03:48 pm Title: Chapter Five

Dun dun dun...

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Date: 06/23/2008 - 03:45 pm Title: Chapter Four

:) That was cute. :)

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Date: 06/23/2008 - 03:30 pm Title: Chapter Three

'Course there is.

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Date: 06/23/2008 - 03:27 pm Title: Chapter Two

Tara and Willow. (:

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Date: 06/23/2008 - 03:22 pm Title: Chapter One

Haha. Poor Spike.

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Date: 06/23/2008 - 03:19 pm Title: Prologue

Poor Buffy... :(

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Date: 01/29/2007 - 11:50 am Title: The End

amazig fic.

Reviewer: SpikeLover213 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/11/2005 - 01:39 pm Title: The End

u should write a sequal to this story!

Reviewer: SpikeLover213 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/11/2005 - 01:38 pm Title: The End

wow! i just read this story and i couldnt stop reading! it's one of the best stories i've read! love it!

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