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Reviewer: cas Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/16/2006 - 04:01 am Title: 09: Poison

After all your dire warnings, not what I expected at all. That is not to say that I am at all disappointed. Will look forward to updates.

Reviewer: SpaceLord Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/16/2006 - 02:20 am Title: 09: Poison

Hmm so Joyce is working for Spike, nice twist. I think that Spike needs to start tending to his other wifes needs, he is not being a good husband. I feel the story is somewhat trying to push Christian values in the way. I mean to just keep women around and not showing them any loving is just wrong. I don't really have a clue how this would work in real life but I do belive that he's got a responsibility to keep them as happy as possible and not just focus on a single one, sure he could have a favourite but you can't negelect the others cause of that. To me that would be like having several kids and picking one as your favourite and making sure all the other kids new it and only love that one kid.

Besides I think both Faith and Anya needs to get some regulartly for them to be happy. It's just cruel to deny them that.

Reviewer: Briana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/16/2006 - 12:49 am Title: 09: Poison

this is such a great story I can't wait for the next chapter!! till next time!!

Reviewer: Livia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/16/2006 - 12:28 am Title: 09: Poison

Absolutley adore the story. Pleeease update soon. I need to know what happens next. I sure do hope that Fred and Wes reunite *hint hint hint* lol Update soon

Reviewer: Mariana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2006 - 09:19 pm Title: Hijacked

yep maybe it's difficult to see Spike with other women, but you have to remember also that he hasn't been with anyone since Buffy arrived or at least since he fell in love with her. there are so many things yet to come it would really be a pity if you miss it, cos real love it's what it's all about, it's hard times, it's romance but angst also. I'm 100% behind you on this Charlie, just keep it going, you're doing an amazing job and I'll say it again, I'm really proud to be your friend ;)

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2006 - 07:58 pm Title: 09: Poison

Really, Really glad to see an update!!

Where do I start? This is not an easy fic to read. I don't mean that it's not a great story! I know that It is a Spike/Buffy fic..It is obvious that Spike is in love with Buffy....BUT...the culture and way of life in this setting is very hard on the Spuffyness..lol.

I also believe in monogamy and fidelity...*It's been me and one man for 15 years now...oh and 3 kids ; ) * But when reading a fic. I always keep in perspective that it is a STORY that I am reading..about two fictional characters..So as far as I am concerned, I will gladly keep reading each update and enjoy every bit of it.. For each his own though.

My wish for this storyline would be that Buffy and Spike end up with one another somehow..and she remains his favorite for always........somehow. I know Spike could never turn his back on his world or his culture, but for instance, maybe if Buffy were to get pregnant.. his happiness would be on a different level..and it would be just a bit more special..ya know?? Something along those line.. You gotta give a girl her Spuffy wishes : D LOL
Whatever you decide to do with this story, please keep up the great work!




Reviewer: jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2006 - 07:02 pm Title: 09: Poison

Love the way you write, but I'll have to agree with ChrissieLinnit.
The idea for the story is great, but I'm getting quesy reading about Spike with all that other women and with Kendra being pregnant now, I think I'll best stop reading.
But I hope to get to read other stuff from you.

Reviewer: ChrissieLinnit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2006 - 06:49 pm Title: 09: Poison

Oops... I even believe passionately in monogamy anf fidelity.

See, you've got me too upset to type accurately now. *pouts pathetically*

Reviewer: ChrissieLinnit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2006 - 06:47 pm Title: 09: Poison

I was so pleased to see that you'd updated this fic.

It's the most torturous story for me to read though. I believe so strongly in manogamy and fidelity, and this story goes against everything that I believe in. Trouble is, I adore Spike and Buffy and I keep crawling back here hoping against hope that through everything you'll write an ending that is just for those two.

Now that Kendra's pregnant I seriously cannot see that happening. This is really nothing personal, pet... because your writing is actually quite energised and creates just the right sense of tension and distress with a strong sexual undercurrent. Usually just what I look for in a fic. But, I'll probably drop out now. Too out of character for what I like.

I do hope you carry on writing though. I'll certainly look out for more fanfic from you.

Reviewer: Angi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2006 - 06:39 pm Title: 09: Poison

That was some wait!!!!!! Hope you can update faster now. Am a bit miffed and sad for Buffy. Isn´t there any kind of Spuffyness possible. You´re killing your audience here. Please update soon.

Reviewer: Suzee Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2006 - 05:34 pm Title: 09: Poison

I'm glad you're updating again...I like this story--though I still don't like the idea of Spike with all the other girls, but as long as you get it Spuffy in the end, missy...and do you know this is Cile? Because it is, I'm just all confusing with too many names. Hope you're having fun this winter--Happy belated Valentine's

Reviewer: M Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2006 - 04:23 pm Title: 09: Poison

I haven't read this yet but I had to say I was soooo happy to see it again. Thanks for posting. :)

Reviewer: Sandy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2005 - 04:53 am Title: Independence Day

Oh Please tell me that more is coming VERY SOON!!!! I'm really enjoying your story.

Author's Response: I've just updated everything up to chapter 9; just waiting for chapters to be okayed by admin...

Reviewer: vicki Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/31/2005 - 10:11 am Title: Hijacked

i likey please submit more it's a good story, i really like the dynamics an the characters are well developed. please write more

Reviewer: vicki Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/31/2005 - 10:11 am Title: Hijacked

i likey please submit more it's a good story, i really like the dynamics an the characters are well developed. please write more

Reviewer: Dani D. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/30/2005 - 06:14 am Title: Independence Day

Really enjoying this scenario...hope you can update soon. I'm hooked!

Reviewer: Erin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/08/2005 - 02:47 am Title: Independence Day

Can't wait for more on this story. Hope it's soon.

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/04/2005 - 02:05 am Title: Independence Day

So much emotion in this chap. Very moving all the way aound, can't help feeling sorry for them both. That master guy is just way scary though. More please.

Reviewer: Blazing Fire Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/03/2005 - 03:42 am Title: Independence Day

I read this story on Adult Fanfiction.net and really love it. I do have one suggestion though. Could you please put space in between your paragraphs. Right now they can be a little hard to read. Thanks

Author's Response: I'm sorry to hear that the spacing isn't ideal for this archive. At the moment, I'm on a tight schedule and unable to adapt my file to every archive I post on individually. Every archive uses a different upload script. You can find all my stories at my own site http://www.buffythevampirelayer.com, I think you will find the spacing more agreeable. Sorry about the inconvenience! Charlie

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/02/2005 - 08:30 pm Title: Independence Day

great updates keep up the good work

Reviewer: Brittany Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/02/2005 - 03:53 pm Title: Independence Day

AWWW *tear* she was such a MEANY!!!!

Reviewer: sue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/02/2005 - 03:28 pm Title: Independence Day

love this forthright, gutsy Buffy - and an interesting twist to this harem (that is not actually a harem) story. A nice long read - please update soon!

Reviewer: Jess Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/02/2005 - 03:26 pm Title: Independence Day

What a horrible time to fall asleep! LOL. She missed his whole speech! Anyway, I really like this story so far, and I can't wait to read more. Please update again when you can :-)

Reviewer: Phoenix Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2005 - 05:46 am Title: Hijacked

This story is great!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait to see what will happen next!!!!! Please continue!!!! Email me when you update? way2hott4u_41@hotmail.com

Author's Response: Register here for my update list, then you won't miss anything any more and will be notified automatically about updates: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/charliesfanfic/ Thanks for reading! Charlie

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2005 - 09:34 pm Title: Hijacked

GOOD SO FAR

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