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Reviewer: Richard Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2005 - 07:08 am Title: The map of honor

Xander was hit in the side of the head but is only concerned about a bloody nose. One would presume a possible concussion ranks higher. But like the other weaknesses in the fighting, this is easily fixed. What concerns me is that quite a bit of time has passed since Buffy and William interacted last. So why is she so dependent on him? It's clearly gone beyond a simple crush but none of the steps in between are explained.

Reviewer: Richard Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2005 - 06:37 am Title: The map of honor

In boxing, the fighters' hands are taped and in padded gloves. This is to prevent them breaking. Because in real life, what happens when hand meets jaw is that your hand breaks and your opponent proceeds to kick you in the gut, in the head and in the nuts.

Reviewer: me Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/18/2005 - 02:31 am Title: The map of honor

loved it!

Reviewer: ace Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2005 - 07:01 am Title: The map of honor

love love love this story. like where you are taking us.

Reviewer: Heather Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2005 - 05:31 am Title: The map of honor

loving the story....great premise...keep going. no more teachers punching students tho...that could be bad. wait til riley graduates then spike can run over him in his car!! j.k

Reviewer: WolfSpider Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2005 - 02:42 pm Title: The map of honor

PS I think that Nurse West needs to give Will a proper full body physcial to make sure he is all ok. *grins*

Reviewer: ariadne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2005 - 12:32 pm Title: The map of honor

i am sooo loving your xander. the way he stands up for his friends and defends them is just great......and yea xander for kickin the crap out of the jerk. he deserves it and more. seems like cordelia has seen a side to xander she likes...*smiles* bet that nurse is the best.....*giggles* love this story and will and buffy at the end.....aaahhhhh...*sighs*

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2005 - 02:58 am Title: The map of honor

Go Xander! Kick some butt! Hehe! Very good chapter, as always! I'm really looking forward to more!

Reviewer: rockerbaby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2005 - 02:52 am Title: The map of honor

Love it! Fabulous update. I was so SO glad to see an update to this story. Please update again soon!

Reviewer: spikelover520 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2005 - 09:37 pm Title: The map of honor

Great story! I love it! I enjoyed reading it! I can't wait to see what happens next. Please continue! ~Ashley~

Reviewer: Bint Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2005 - 04:32 pm Title: The map of honor

i love it more soon plz!!!!! its great!!!!!

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2005 - 02:47 pm Title: The map of honor

Loved it - no worries. The begin was cute (Buffy taliking with her baby about the name for her), Buffy getting better with her mother as it seems, then Xander stand up against Riley. And Buffy longed to see William, huh? I'm almost sure that he didn't expect that. TNX for the update :))

Reviewer: Wolfspider Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2005 - 01:18 pm Title: The map of honor

WOW Xander being a stand up kind of guy...did not think he had it in him. I am glad to see him kick Riley's ass. Oh pooorrrr wittle Riley might have to not to West Point, wahhh wanhhhhhhhhhh....*laughs*...Loved the baby names of possibilities. That nurse West way to take care of the injured. Will was amazing, taking a real risk holding Riley like that, hope it does not stir up too much trouble. Though as with most stories I am sure it will. Excellent chapter, moving things along here and letting us see into the characters. I think Will's faultering in his ablity to not want to "have" buffy though.

Reviewer: loxie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2005 - 12:17 pm Title: The map of honor

i like it! keep it up...........update!!!!!

Reviewer: Tara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2005 - 12:13 pm Title: The map of honor

I was just wondering about this story the other day. I thought it was a great chapter. I love it when Xander is a good guy and not crushing on Buffy. I also love the way little by little Buffy is figuring out who's support she want and needs. Keep going.

Reviewer: Shady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2005 - 11:08 am Title: The map of honor

I've missed this story, so glad to see an update. And yay for Xander and Will hitting Riley..he's such a prick!! Great chapter!

Reviewer: Caatje Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2005 - 10:23 am Title: The map of honor

i've read all chapters non stop. had read the first 3 earlier, but then it wasnt updated after that. Love all the chaps, and please update again soon! Cant wait to read how it continues!!

Reviewer: albie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2005 - 08:12 am Title: The map of honor

I think this was another good, strong chapter. I really liked Xander's defense and the moments of surprising kindness and insight from Cordy. The one part i'm not sure about is Spike punching Riley. Whether he's buddies with the principal or not, whether the student was in the wrong or not, there would be HUGE ramifications for a teacher punching a student. I think something else could be done in its place rather than a punch...unless your plan IS for him to lose his job or be suspended as well, in which case, you're on the right path! :)

Reviewer: Mariana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2005 - 06:50 am Title: The map of honor

not sure?? i loved this chapter!!! glad riley is going to get what he deserves!!! hope so...at least...and OMG!! spuffy couldn't be cutter...i think we're getting to the UST phase...and some of the angst is disolving..or am i wrong and it's just wishful thinking? anyhow...wonderful chapter!! fantastic work!! thanx...hope you update soon...pretty please ;)

Reviewer: Tam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2005 - 04:38 am Title: The map of honor

Okay all caught up now! Megan recced this fic to me and i'm so glad she did! Excellent plotline can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Megan/Peta Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2005 - 03:08 am Title: The map of honor

Nia, I loved this fic so far. The sensitivity is beautiful and as awful as it is to believe, the portrayal is extremely realistic. My only fear right now--despite the massive feeling of satisfaction--is that if a teacher hit a student like Will just hit Riley, his career would be over. He'd be charged with assault and be plastered all over the news. In Australia, anyway.I would assume the US--being that they sue anyone and everyone over the littles things--would be pretty much the same. So, to continue the realism, Will isn't going to get out of this very well, and Buffy's support could be very dicey. Still, this is fiction and it relies on Riley, and I am sure you have this all plotted and worked out, so I will finish with saying I will absolutely keep up with your updates from now on.

Reviewer: Jess Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2005 - 02:12 am Title: The map of honor

I really love this story! Can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: jenny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2005 - 01:13 am Title: The map of honor

another great chapter. riley got what he deserved. i like the whole protective big brother role xander has taken up. cant wait to see what else u have in store for us. i know we wont be disappointed.

Reviewer: Karyn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2005 - 01:11 am Title: The map of honor

i love this story ...it's one of those you just feel so bad for buffy and want to cheer will on and go xander being all manly. lol

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2005 - 01:10 am Title: The map of honor

Oh it was going good until the cliffy ending.......LOL well not so cliffy but you'd gotten to a nice part of much needed cuddle fest.....

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