Date: 05/15/2005 - 12:39 pm Title: Just Survive
oh boy...Buffy's definitely been through a lot...can't wait to see where this goes, even if the idea wasn't yours the writing is so great job!
Date: 04/16/2005 - 08:02 pm Title: Just Survive
****AUTHOR'S NOTE**** For some reason I can't respond to reviews, but: to Reciprocity- I wrote this before I wrote Broken, but I already had that story blocked out in an outline, so it wasn't that hard. And to spikes_niblet: the main thing I changed was the beginning (because it wasn't mine, so I rewrote the first part). The rest of the story stays basically the same (because after the original chapters, everything was mine). I did change the last chapter, because I was never really happy with it, but it's not a huge change. The basic idea stays the same, it's just the location is different. Thanks for the reviews!
Date: 04/11/2005 - 07:01 pm Title: Just Survive
A brilliant Fic.... I can't wait for more! Like all your others your writing this one brilliantly! Please update soon I need more!!!! I think you have managed to protray Spike and Buffy's characters brilliantly keeping their individual traits that they have in the show... while a the same time making it AU! It is really well done and like I said I can't wait for more!
Date: 04/08/2005 - 06:39 pm Title: Just Survive
Hi - I saw this fic again. First I wanted to ask if you did change much to the other version I know but I decided to just read it. They changes I found you made were fitting the story very fine. :-)))
Date: 04/04/2005 - 05:05 am Title: Just Survive
Started reading this back when it was "Your My Temptation" but forgot about it until now. I'm loving what your doing with it. Keep up the good work and like always, update soon.
Date: 04/04/2005 - 01:46 am Title: Just Survive
great so far cant wait for more
Date: 04/03/2005 - 11:07 pm Title: Just Survive
What a great beginning Ashlee! My heart is just breaking for Buffy. I love the little snippets of her previous foster homes that you let us see. It really gives us a sense of how much horror she has been through. I'm really, really excited to read more of this and hope you update soon. I love stories where Buffy is a survivor. This one looks to be very promising.
Date: 04/03/2005 - 10:13 pm Title: Just Survive
The idea is definitely intriguing and the whole rape situation is disturbing and sad (in an I-want-to-read-more way). I'm gonna tune in and see what you have in store for this because the first chapter sort of threw me off since the writing style seems to be a mix of yours and darla's? Well, I always have faith in you, so I'll be patient! :)
Date: 04/03/2005 - 08:55 pm Title: Just Survive
another story on the hop .... this one looks good, cant wait for more
Date: 04/03/2005 - 08:14 pm Title: Just Survive
Poor Poor Buffy! I sure hope things get better for her really soon This is going to be another one of your must reads!
Date: 04/03/2005 - 07:47 pm Title: Just Survive
Awwwww sad sad sad awwwwsad sad awwww more more
Date: 04/03/2005 - 07:45 pm Title: Just Survive
Wow, I can't wait for more this seems like its going to be a really good story.
Date: 04/03/2005 - 07:32 pm Title: Just Survive
I want more!!
Date: 04/03/2005 - 07:21 pm Title: Just Survive
Interesting plot...Looking forward to the next chapter :)
Date: 04/03/2005 - 04:30 pm Title: Just Survive
rough lot. can't wait for more!
Date: 04/03/2005 - 03:39 pm Title: Just Survive
I was really excited to see that you're rewriting Darla's part, and I can't wait to see what you change. I read the orriginal too, but I still wanna read this one! Please update soon!
Date: 04/03/2005 - 03:04 pm Title: Just Survive
I really like the start to this story, but I read the beginning that Darla wrote and I always thought the bankcard idea was a little fishy. The account couldn't be secret - it would have gone through probate. That and the remaider of Joyce's belongings would have ended up settled, but I just can't fathom that the bankcard would work 6 years later. Sorry to be picky about this. Love your work so much. Maybe you can find a way to make that detail work.
Author's Response: Thanks for letting me know! I left the bank card in the original version that Allison beta'd and then decided to take it out when I began rewriting chapter 2, because I realized that it didn't fit at all. I didn't know I missed it at the end of the chapter, so I took it out now. Thanks so much for telling me!