Reviews For Master

Name: ScoobyDawn (Anonymous) · Date: 05/03/2015 - 03:55 am · For: Chapter Thirty-Three: Just Out of Reach

Arrrgh!  You can't leave us like this, please, please finish this fic. :)

Name: kasumi (Anonymous) · Date: 01/04/2015 - 10:17 pm · For: Chapter Ten-Some Things Never Change

I'm so loving this story! I've always had in my pervert mind this idea of a bastard Spike kidnapping a human Buffy for making her his sex slave :D :D

Ok, now some considerations. (read only if you like readers' feedback, because is my own personal thoughts, influenced by personal tastes and ideas)

I think Spike's change of heart toward Buffy was too fast. Maybe was needed more of his POV to gradually explain it. Then, his total sincerity about his feelings was a little strange. I mean, he surely considers loving her as a weekness and telling her how he feels, equals telling her how much power she held over him. In the same way, I think his behaviour toward her must have changed more gradually, although his frequent changes of mood are perfectly IC. (mmh, I would have preferred more angst between them ^_^)

Finally, I'm sooooo sad the story is still a WIP :( Hope one day you would give it an end.

Wish you a good 2015 and many good things :)


Name: LittleJenn (Signed) · Date: 10/29/2008 - 12:40 am · For: Chapter Thirty-Three: Just Out of Reach
please update again i have to know what's going to happen next. i love this story so much :)

Name: Crystal Pegasus (Anonymous) · Date: 08/26/2007 - 01:30 am · For: Chapter Thirty-Three: Just Out of Reach
I'm still reading and still loving it. Yes Damon, payback is a bitch! Remember that later, cause if you harm Buffy, Spike won't rest until you are worse that dust. He'll keep you alive (barely) just to torture you day in and day out so be warned!

More please and sooner than a year if you can.

Name: biting_back (Anonymous) · Date: 08/24/2007 - 03:53 pm · For: Chapter Thirty-Three: Just Out of Reach
need more!!!

Name: pixiecorn (Signed) · Date: 08/24/2007 - 04:01 am · For: Chapter Thirty-Three: Just Out of Reach
hehe i'm loving it:) cant wait for the next update.....i've had this story marked that i wanted to read it for a while and i'm regretting i didnt sooner it's awesome:)

Name: gdo (Anonymous) · Date: 08/18/2007 - 01:42 am · For: Chapter Thirty-Three: Just Out of Reach
yea! I'm glad you picked up this fic again! aw, great, Damon and his upper hand. Though I love Buffy's use of the vamps to make her "stepping stones."

Name: smlcspike (Signed) · Date: 08/16/2007 - 11:38 pm · For: Chapter Thirty-Three: Just Out of Reach
OH no that is not good, okay I just read this whole fic so now I need more. I love it, and want to see if he will get back with Vincent, and Natasha.

Name: smlcspike (Signed) · Date: 08/16/2007 - 11:17 pm · For: Chapter Thirty Two- The Sound of Marching Feet
oh I am sure Buffy will be safe, and evenully make her way to Spike.

Name: smlcspike (Signed) · Date: 08/16/2007 - 10:56 pm · For: Chapter Thirty-Save Your Scissors for Someone Else's Skin
oh I wonder what Giles is going to say and at least she is giving Spike hope.

Name: smlcspike (Signed) · Date: 08/16/2007 - 10:40 pm · For: Chapter Thirty-Never Leave Me
oh I like Xander at the end.

Name: smlcspike (Signed) · Date: 08/16/2007 - 10:09 pm · For: Chapter Twenty-Nine-Games
oh maybe GIles will need to do a sound proofing spell.
I they can always find a loophole.

Name: smlcspike (Signed) · Date: 08/16/2007 - 09:50 pm · For: Chapter Twenty-Eight-Seeking Solace
oh I love it.

Name: smlcspike (Signed) · Date: 08/16/2007 - 09:33 pm · For: Chapter Twenty-Seven: Sins of the Past
Oh that was good, so answers where had.

Name: smlcspike (Signed) · Date: 08/16/2007 - 09:16 pm · For: Chapter Twenty-Six- If I Lose You, My Heart Will Be Broken
oh how could she do that when she didn't even know about it, and she never bit him.

Name: smlcspike (Signed) · Date: 08/16/2007 - 08:51 pm · For: Chapter Twenty-Five- Pleasant Surprises
oh he just walked in as she was wanting to go and find him.

Name: smlcspike (Signed) · Date: 08/16/2007 - 08:33 pm · For: Chapter Twenty-Four- Spill My Heart for You
Oh I hope Buffy comes back to him he needs her, he just gave up everything for her.

Name: cordykitten (Signed) · Date: 08/16/2007 - 05:38 pm · For: Chapter Thirty-Three: Just Out of Reach
Duh.. if you hadn't mentioned it I thought it was almost a month because I didn't look at the year. *waves hi*
You're very welcome to post this chapter.
Wow, what a fight. Facing the danger Buffy did indeed "top herself" (to grow over her own abilities). Still good their friends did help.
Oh my, even if Spike came Buffy is in trouble again. An evil cliffhanger indeed. So I hope for a sooner update this time.
And again: Good to see an update :)

Name: smlcspike (Signed) · Date: 08/16/2007 - 09:38 am · For: Chapter Twenty-Three-Showdown
oh no, they managed to get her.

Name: smlcspike (Signed) · Date: 08/16/2007 - 09:22 am · For: Chapter Twenty-Two-If You Were Meant To Be My Lover I Wouldn't Have To
Oh she almost told him. Good think Tasha is stay with her so she won't be alone with Giles crew comes.

Name: smlcspike (Signed) · Date: 08/16/2007 - 09:14 am · For: Chapter Twenty-One- Preparation...Preparation...Preparation
ok i hope Spike can keep Buffy safe or will he let her go with Giles to keep her safe.

Name: smlcspike (Signed) · Date: 08/16/2007 - 09:01 am · For: Chapter Twenty-You Won't Get to See the Tears I Cry
Oh if she just told him and is Giles gang stupid.

Name: smlcspike (Signed) · Date: 08/16/2007 - 08:48 am · For: Chapter Nineteen- And It Feels So Good
Oh i liked.

Name: smlcspike (Signed) · Date: 08/16/2007 - 12:53 am · For: Chapter Eighteen-Reunited
oh that is not good, I wonder what kind of help Spike will get.

Name: smlcspike (Signed) · Date: 08/16/2007 - 12:42 am · For: Chapter Seventeen-Don't Let Him Hurt the Girl
oh he came just in time, love it.

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