[Report This]Date: 07/21/2007 - 10:46 pm Title: Chapter 17
oh my I wasn't expecting her to be an Angel was she for Spike or Nigel, I would say maybe both.
Date: 06/02/2005 - 10:58 am Title: Chapter 17
Congrats on the noms! And Candice? So wasn't expecting there being more of a story to her. =)
Date: 05/31/2005 - 02:37 am Title: Chapter 17
wow...never saw that coming (the candice plot) loved it...thanx so much...wonderful chapter...
Date: 05/30/2005 - 10:07 pm Title: Chapter 17
Great chapter! Can't wait for more, so please update soon! Take care, C ; )
Date: 05/30/2005 - 08:35 pm Title: Chapter 17
Ooo. congrats on the nom. This story is so excellent lol, I really liked the update, looking forward to the big climax and the twists and turns. take care
Date: 05/30/2005 - 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 17
Oh - that was unexpected - Candice is a guardian angel? Clever!
And Caleb is on his way. Mmm - according to Candice this means the begin of the end of Dru. And I'm glad that Hank will stay with them. TNX for the update!
Date: 05/30/2005 - 05:45 pm Title: Chapter 17
I am sorry this story is coming to an end. You have written a wonderful story. You still brought the issue of child abuse to be viewed and thought seriously about. You are a very good writer and I will be reading more of your pieces wherever they are posted.
Date: 05/30/2005 - 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 17
Candice is a guardian angel??? Cool! waitng for more!
Date: 05/30/2005 - 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 17
WOOWOO hank is the new chief! i lvoe that and Candice being a guardien angel? just adorable! Love this story!!!
Date: 05/30/2005 - 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 17
I know I've said it at least twice before, but I"m gonna say it again. I love Hank. You are doing such a wonderful job of portraying him in a positive light. And it is so refreshing to see the way he, as Joyce's ex, is integrated back into the family. This characterization of him is one that I can see comfortably enjoying holiday dinners without drama. As for everything else, yay! It is exciting that Caleb is in the story (I actually like him in all his deranged lunacy). Still not completely convinced that Spike made the correct decision when he divorced Buffy, but it happened, and where he goes from here is what really matters.
Author's Response: How many decisions if given the chance would we change. I know I have alot, for underpressure and stress you really don't think clearly. Your right, it's not really a story of why he did it, but how can he fix it and if Buffy can find it in her heart to forgive him for being human and trying to do the right thing in protecting his son the only way he knew how at the time. And Caleb has been soooo fun to write in this one.....not too much of story time, but........LOL, can't tell all my secrets......
Date: 05/30/2005 - 01:44 pm Title: Chapter 17
Nice twist! Didn't see that one coming. Enjoying this story!
Date: 05/30/2005 - 01:44 pm Title: Chapter 17
love the part about Candice. and great update!!!
Date: 05/30/2005 - 01:26 pm Title: Chapter 17
Very, very cool. I love the twists and turns you put in your stories and the way you give us a dash of everything going on. The part with Dru was just creepy and I'm so glad that Hank is such a good guy in this and that he has such a great relationship with Joye and Giles. Love, LOVE the bit at the end :)
Date: 05/30/2005 - 12:33 pm Title: Chapter 17
This is very good. I like how you threw that little twist in at the end of the chapter. Luv, Spuf
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