Date: 05/06/2005 - 11:32 am Title: 1
Great start to what looks to be a really intriguing story. Buffy seems a little arrogant about Spike's continuing love, so I hope you knock her down a peg or two. Loved the imagery of Spike and the Dragon. Looking forward to more. Thanks.
Author's Response: Thanks, I realy eed to update this fic. Hope you still like it :P
Date: 05/06/2005 - 11:01 am Title: 1
The first chapter was very good. Wonder why Buffy is with the Immortal this time ... She knew according to Prophecy, as the Immortal Slayer she was the soul-mate of Antonius Lisignolia, the Immortal Champion. Funny though, the prophesy called him the “Eternal Champion”, but the git was boring
as drying paint. Prophecy, huh? Seems to me that there is a new not so boring “Eternal Champion” now :)) Looking forward to read on.
Author's Response: Well Buffy is rather dense, thanks for the feedback
Date: 05/06/2005 - 10:44 am Title: 1
Sounds promising. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: I hope I can write more soon
Date: 05/06/2005 - 10:37 am Title: 1
Woo hoo.... GREAT start!!!! I hope you will be updating soon... PLEASE!!!
Author's Response: thanks