I'm more for reviewing at the end but I figured i should say this her since this is where Im quoting from and really the only thing about the story that I noticed was off. Where Spike says, "Flash fried in a pillar of fire saving the world. I got better.", when they are talking about bringing Illyria back. In the timeline for this story that never happened. Buffy and Spike closed the hellmouth without him dying. The words for that part of the chapter were pullrd directly from Ats season 5, Ep: Shells, but the statement lacks continuity with the rest of the story. Ok I may have over done it with this big long paragraph so Im finished now.

I am sooo loving this story. I have only one question. The story started before the end of season 7 (when Spike "Flash fried in a pillar of fire saving the world. I got better.") The PTB got rid of the First and Spike went to LA because of Dru's death not because of the amulet, which hasn't existed in this story. Buffy also alludes to Spike dying by saying that all three of them have died true deaths. A minor detail but just a little confusing. I still absolutely love the story.

LOL Harm is funny!! oooh no more magic messes LOOOOL more soon huni luved the update xx

Good update. Go Buffy for being adamant about not taking Laura's soul from heaven possibly. She knows how that feels. Go Buffy. Look forward to the next update.

Oh boy! Her reaction to the humans rule world speech wasn't so great. I have a feeling this does not bode well for the LA or our heroes. Good for Buffy for standing up to all of them about the resurrection. Can't wait for the next update!