Date: 07/10/2005 - 02:00 am Title: Part five
Excellent chapter. I wondered just how long WR&H was going to let them get away with it ... or if they would get away with it. Hamilton was such a slime ball, but he was suave about it. You wrote him well. I look forward to the next chapter.
Date: 07/09/2005 - 04:15 am Title: Part five
Another wonderful, emotionally powerful chapter. Great writing. Keep it up.
Date: 07/09/2005 - 12:47 am Title: Part five
just caught up on a few chapters. I love where you are going with this. How you've altered things and the way you are working in your own agenda. Looking forward to more.
Date: 07/08/2005 - 10:57 pm Title: Part five
wonderful chapter! Very powerful ! is there a better word for excellent? Amaing!
Date: 07/08/2005 - 10:05 am Title: Part five
AAAGGGHHH... please, please update really freakin' quick, cuz I am still so in love with your story and can't wait to see what happens to them.
Date: 07/08/2005 - 05:25 am Title: Part five
this was so good. keep up the great work. please post soon.
Date: 07/08/2005 - 05:04 am Title: Part five
great update