I really like your story and hope to read more soon.

Hey, good first attempt at a story since you haven't written in so long. As a British person, one who is extremely familiar with the language and always likes to see Spike written well, I was wondering if you could explain to me what is meant by your last line: Bugger for a nark! I get the whole pear-shaped thing, but I don't understand the 'nark' bit. Is he supposedly be be complaining irritatingly or bemoaning something about being a spy? Please let me know, as it's doing my head in. Other than that, keep it up! I would love to see where this goes.

Author's Response: That line was supposed to be "Bugger that for a lark." Thank you for bringing it to my attention. I've fixed the typo.

I am very much enjoying this story! Can I just mention one tiny thing? The first person POV is a bit distracting when it jumps back and forth, I lose the flow of the story because I have to 'figure' out who is 'talking'. There were several paragraphs this chapter that I had to reread more than once because I found myself having to stop and say "hey wait, who is this talking here?" And wow, god forbid I have to use my brain when reading spuffy, LOL! Perish the thought. Anyway, just something I thought I should mention. Other than that, fantastic job and I am such a spoiler whore, I had to run to the Bloodshedverse to check out the challenge and now I'm REALLY looking forward to updates!!! :P

Author's Response: If it helps this story will jump back and forth between Buffy and Spike's POV and the switch is indicated by ~~~~~.

Author's Response: If it helps this story will jump back and forth between Buffy and Spike's POV and the switch is indicated by ~~~~~.