Reviews For Becoming Spike
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Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/10/2005 - 08:41 pm Title: Three

Well - Dru has no reason to cry that she is alone now - it's her own fault! .. what did Angel do with her anyway? I don't think he killed her. Stupid Angel - good thing that Spike is dead when Spike did help Buffy. Buffy's mom? Good that she wants Buffy back - and about the slayerthink - it did almost gone well, huh? And the dream - knowing what I know of the BtVS seasons - I would say it was kind of a slayer dream.

Reviewer: Steph Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2005 - 10:45 pm Title: Three

I hope xander stakes angel...stupid angel...great chapter!*S*

Reviewer: mirroronthewall Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2005 - 10:03 pm Title: Three

oh boy, poor Angel! Well, not POOR angel, but you know. One thing I had a question about is Buffy's school thing. At the beginning of the chapter, you mentioned “I can’t deal with this right now. I’ve got to figure out what to do with the rest of my homeless, wanted-by-the-police, expelled-from-high-school life. Meet me at the Library tomorrow at dusk, we’ll talk. And do something about her, will you.” I point at Dru who is still yowling and clawing blindly at the statue. But then later on in the chapter she just goes back to school like nothing happened, with no mention of being expelled, wanted by the police, etc. Did I miss something? Or is there a method to your madness that I just need to wait to the next chapter and all will be revealed? Oh, and since Bittenandstaked pointed out a typo in the previous chapter, can I point out one too? There is a misquote from Something Blue, but that's probably me being way too petty. Sorry!!! I am really enjoying this fic, and I apologize for bringing this stuff up. I just figured since you were a new writer, it's nice to be shown these things.. Can't wait for more!!

Author's Response: The school thing will be explained in the next chapter which was supposed to be included in this chapter until it ran way too long. As for misquoting "Something Blue" - I got my quotes from the old Psyche scripts (before Fox made them take the site down even though it was based in Germany!) so let's just chalk any differences between the script and what aired up to the fact that it's a dream sequence and not an actual chapter set in S4. ;^> BTW, I'm hoping to have chapter 4 up tonight! Peyton

Reviewer: ~*~Tasha~*~ Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2005 - 06:26 pm Title: Three

Please update again soon. Want to see where this goes more. INteresting dream, and Angel is still there along with Dru but Spike is gone. I wonder when Spike will return, etc. Look forward to the next update.

Author's Response: Spike will return fairly soon, but according to the original challenge there are some things I have to accomplish before I bring him back! %^>

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