This is a very interesting story and I can't wait for more. I had to laugh at the ‘hell dimension’- that’s one way of explaining the last few seasons! You write well and despite the unusual circumstances, the characters were nicely in character. The only problem I could see, was your over-use of exclamation and question marks. Limit it to one of each or two of the same. If there is a need for emphasis, there are other more correct ways of doing so. This isn't a major problem but it does get a little annoying after a while. Update soon!