Reviews For Becoming Spike
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Reviewer: romero Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/02/2005 - 02:47 am Title: Two

I really like your story and hope to read more soon.

Reviewer: Steph Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2005 - 10:45 pm Title: Three

I hope xander stakes angel...stupid angel...great chapter!*S*

Reviewer: mirroronthewall Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2005 - 10:03 pm Title: Three

oh boy, poor Angel! Well, not POOR angel, but you know. One thing I had a question about is Buffy's school thing. At the beginning of the chapter, you mentioned “I can’t deal with this right now. I’ve got to figure out what to do with the rest of my homeless, wanted-by-the-police, expelled-from-high-school life. Meet me at the Library tomorrow at dusk, we’ll talk. And do something about her, will you.” I point at Dru who is still yowling and clawing blindly at the statue. But then later on in the chapter she just goes back to school like nothing happened, with no mention of being expelled, wanted by the police, etc. Did I miss something? Or is there a method to your madness that I just need to wait to the next chapter and all will be revealed? Oh, and since Bittenandstaked pointed out a typo in the previous chapter, can I point out one too? There is a misquote from Something Blue, but that's probably me being way too petty. Sorry!!! I am really enjoying this fic, and I apologize for bringing this stuff up. I just figured since you were a new writer, it's nice to be shown these things.. Can't wait for more!!

Author's Response: The school thing will be explained in the next chapter which was supposed to be included in this chapter until it ran way too long. As for misquoting "Something Blue" - I got my quotes from the old Psyche scripts (before Fox made them take the site down even though it was based in Germany!) so let's just chalk any differences between the script and what aired up to the fact that it's a dream sequence and not an actual chapter set in S4. ;^> BTW, I'm hoping to have chapter 4 up tonight! Peyton

Reviewer: ~*~Tasha~*~ Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2005 - 06:26 pm Title: Three

Please update again soon. Want to see where this goes more. INteresting dream, and Angel is still there along with Dru but Spike is gone. I wonder when Spike will return, etc. Look forward to the next update.

Author's Response: Spike will return fairly soon, but according to the original challenge there are some things I have to accomplish before I bring him back! %^>

Reviewer: Mariana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2005 - 04:16 am Title: Two

pear shaped?? ooohhh!!! just hope spike doesn't go to hell though...anyhow...wonderful chapter!! just loved it!! thanx!! please update soon ;)

Reviewer: bittenandstaked Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2005 - 06:44 am Title: Two

Hey, good first attempt at a story since you haven't written in so long. As a British person, one who is extremely familiar with the language and always likes to see Spike written well, I was wondering if you could explain to me what is meant by your last line: Bugger for a nark! I get the whole pear-shaped thing, but I don't understand the 'nark' bit. Is he supposedly be be complaining irritatingly or bemoaning something about being a spy? Please let me know, as it's doing my head in. Other than that, keep it up! I would love to see where this goes.

Author's Response: That line was supposed to be "Bugger that for a lark." Thank you for bringing it to my attention. I've fixed the typo.

Reviewer: Lily Constancy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/26/2005 - 03:01 pm Title: Two

WOW!!! Great chapter!!! Nice twist!!! Can't wait for chapter 3!!! ~Lily

Reviewer: MantaRay Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/26/2005 - 02:49 pm Title: Two

I am very much enjoying this story! Can I just mention one tiny thing? The first person POV is a bit distracting when it jumps back and forth, I lose the flow of the story because I have to 'figure' out who is 'talking'. There were several paragraphs this chapter that I had to reread more than once because I found myself having to stop and say "hey wait, who is this talking here?" And wow, god forbid I have to use my brain when reading spuffy, LOL! Perish the thought. Anyway, just something I thought I should mention. Other than that, fantastic job and I am such a spoiler whore, I had to run to the Bloodshedverse to check out the challenge and now I'm REALLY looking forward to updates!!! :P

Author's Response: If it helps this story will jump back and forth between Buffy and Spike's POV and the switch is indicated by ~~~~~.

Author's Response: If it helps this story will jump back and forth between Buffy and Spike's POV and the switch is indicated by ~~~~~.

Reviewer: Mariana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2005 - 11:31 pm Title: One

love the concept of this story..and i want to know what happens next...please continue..thanx!!

Reviewer: Lily Constancy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/24/2005 - 10:49 pm Title: One

Can't wait to see where you take this challenge. It was a good solid start. Can't wait to read more!!! ~Lily

Reviewer: Steph Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/24/2005 - 10:41 pm Title: One

I like it. It's interesting I was hoping someone would do that challenge!

Reviewer: Rain Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/24/2005 - 10:37 pm Title: One

Hey there, nice inner dialog. I especially liked Spike's thoughts on Dru. Update soon.

Reviewer: Tasha Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/24/2005 - 07:06 pm Title: One

Good start. I would like to read where it goes next. The idea of the story from the challenge is an intriguing one.

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