Date: 06/06/2005 - 08:41 am Title: Nothing new
If you are even remotely serious about writing why don't you do yourself and everyone else a favour and read over your work, fix your spelling and your grammar.. get a beta... expand on your plot ideas giving the bare bones a little more flesh and substance... and then maybe you might have a decent fic on your hands.... if however you are simply doing this for the reviews...both good and bad... then I think you should go and see someone about the obvious attention related issues you have.
Date: 06/06/2005 - 04:25 am Title: Nothing new
aww how sad i cant believe therenot getting together and wat about the kid. please let them get together. i love this story and cant wit to read more . please update as soon as u can, cant wait to see wat happens next thanx
Date: 06/05/2005 - 09:47 pm Title: Nothing new
Hello! i like this story and cant wait to see what happens...dum dum duuuuuuuuuum lol keep up the good work!
Date: 06/05/2005 - 08:50 am Title: Nothing new
Do you only care about are the praises and not the truth on what someone thought on your story/chapter? No matter who the author is, they all make mistakes. No body is perfect. Yet, most of the better established writers in the fandom have at last one beta to read over their chapter to check for spelling/punctuation/grammatical errors. Some even have as many as 5 betas for a story. And most authors like it if someone finds a mistake and points it out to them because they learn from their mistakes.
Do you not realize that there is a place to post your author notes at the beginning and not the end of the chapter? Even without the A/N at the end, your latest chapter only had 633 words. I’m not for sure, and you may check with Pari, but I believe there is a 1,000 word minimum per chapter.
To me, I read your A/N as you just do not care on the quality of your work. But then again, if you do not care why should anyone else.
If it is true that you are deleting the reviews that do not sing your praises than that’s just sad and petty, most people do not read the reviews or let them influence their judgment on if they are going to read a story or not.
Author's Response: Okay first of all Im gonna clear up a few things...Ihave not only deleted the bad reviews I have deleted a few more then that and not all of them were bad I said that now so there is no more to eplain im sorry if you feel that i have only been deleting bad review But its not the truth so go ahead and belive what you want ....thanks for your time.....christina
Date: 06/05/2005 - 07:02 am Title: Nothing new
I'm sorry, but I thought that when you said that you wanted reviews, you actually wanted to hear what people thought of your story. Apparently not, since you seem to delete every review that doesn’t say that your story is great. I’m sorry to say this, but I think that it would be best if you just wrote your story down on a paper, so that no one else got to read it, then you wouldn’t get these reviews, and you would probably be happier, or whatever. Suggestion, get a beta.
Date: 06/05/2005 - 06:30 am Title: Nothing new
Your story has the potential to be a good story, but you have several spelling, punctuation and grammatical error through out the story that makes it hard to read. The timeline and plot are not very believable. How would Buffy know that she is pregnant the next day? After how Joyce reacted to the news of Buffy and Angel sleeping together in season 2, I cannot see her happy about this situation because “they are in love” and would allow Buffy to drop out of school and move away. I would suggest finding a beta to help.
Date: 06/05/2005 - 05:17 am Title: Nothing new
loved it but did they get back together and did buffy and spike get on the plane together or just her by herself?
Date: 06/05/2005 - 04:22 am Title: Nothing new
Great chapter - I loved it, cause it was so so sweet! Can't wait for more, so please post the next chapter as soon as you can! Take care, C ; )
Date: 06/05/2005 - 04:15 am Title: Nothing new
omg wow way to leave someone hanging and in a good way luv the story so much update soon luvs much
Date: 06/05/2005 - 01:08 am Title: Nothing new
more soon plz!!!!!!!!!!1
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