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Reviewer: turnedbyspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/06/2006 - 01:40 pm Title: Everything we do is perfect

Yay! They made love!!! and they're so in love with each other, it's perfect!

Reviewer: spikeshotchick Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2005 - 05:55 pm Title: Everything we do is perfect

Okay I loved that but orbs is the most unsexy word ever made. Just say eyes please

Author's Response: Lol i didnt even relise i wrote that. Sorry :) Either way though i hate to use the same word a lot so i try to mix it up a lil bit. Thanx for the review and ill keep the tip in mind :)

Reviewer: Shanbits Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2005 - 03:35 am Title: Everything we do is perfect

*sweat drips off brow, skin flushed, and eyes dilated as she re-reads this steamy chap* Dammit girl, you just can’t read this type of stuff in the summer heat we’re having without provoking an empathetic response in your readers!! Hehe…it was very well done, I’m still revisiting all the sizzling sessions in my mind! I love that you had Buffy be the one in control over her first time. Great job on the descriptive detail…it sure did help the whole visualization process! Hehe…*grins broadly* Reading this fic has definitely become one of those decadent guilty pleasures we all love to indulge in! xxx

Author's Response: Jesus shan lol. Um...thanx :) I thought it would be nice if she had the power in their first time, to show him how much he really means in some way.....so this is a pleasure to you mmm? So glad to hear it, love ya sweetie:)xxx

Reviewer: Cecilia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2005 - 01:31 pm Title: Everything we do is perfect

Ahhh-Spuffy goodness!! I loved it. You did a great job of combining sweet and tender with just plain HOT--just like our favorite couple in this ficlet. The whole injured bad boy line at the beginning, another great glimpse of our beautiful vampire. ***sighs*** I could totally picture him in my mind. Ok, having a moment there. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Please update soon. I'm hooked:)

Author's Response: Thanx so much, its always hard to write those scenes so feedback is great. Its funny cause you dont wanna seem like a perv but at the same time how the *beep* else are you supposed to describe their lovemaking lol? Im about to write the next chap now so i hope you like it, xxx thanx again for the great review!!!

Reviewer: Caitie Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2005 - 01:07 pm Title: Everything we do is perfect

Great chapter! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanx so much i hope you like the next :)

Reviewer: spufette Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2005 - 12:28 pm Title: Everything we do is perfect

Well, I certainly liked it! It's tough, to write sex scenes, huh? You did very well indeed. Luv, Spuf

Author's Response: It really is lol!!! It's a fine line between sweet and perverted but the more i write the less i start to care lol, i still find it a little embarassing though lol! thanx so much for the kind words and im glad youre enjoying it :)xxx

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2005 - 11:18 am Title: Everything we do is perfect

Very hot. Love it. The foreshadowing is killing me lol.

Author's Response: Thanx very much, the bad moment is gonna come up soon, after the next chap actually and im dreading it lol! I hope you like the next chap and thanx for posting a review, i appreciate it!

Reviewer: Aisling Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2005 - 08:36 am Title: Everything we do is perfect

awww huni ur a star! thanx for the update this chapter rocked! cya xx

Author's Response: wow lol, i dont even know what to say to that, thanx so much and im uber happy that your liking this!!!!xxx

Reviewer: olivia-luv Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2005 - 08:24 am Title: Everything we do is perfect

so hot and sweet !!! bravo !!

Author's Response: (blushes) thanks very much, its always nice to know when someone likes your work, makes me all warm inside lol, xxx

Reviewer: kittykat Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2005 - 06:47 am Title: Everything we do is perfect

AWWW i thought it was sweet very cute chapter cant wait for the next update.....all my love christina

Author's Response: Thank you very much Christina, so glad to see your liking it!xxx

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2005 - 05:45 am Title: Everything we do is perfect

absolutely loved it

Author's Response: Thank you so much xxx

Reviewer: Seraiza Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2005 - 05:37 am Title: Everything we do is perfect

great update, waiting for more!

Author's Response: thanx so much :)

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2005 - 05:34 am Title: Everything we do is perfect

awwww how cute im so happy that they finally did it. i loved the gift he gave her thats so sweet also i loved that she wanted it a pushed for it, normally its the other way around. i love this story so much and am so happy that updated. this story kicks ass. i really hope that hes there in the morning and that everything works out. please update as soon as u can, i cant wait to read more and am dying to see wat happens next thanx

Author's Response: Thanx Sarah :) I thought it would be sweeter if William was the one who wanted their first time to be special....glad you thought it was too! Hell be there in the morning but his turning is coming close, sorry, but i promise that it will have a happy ending:) Thanx so much for the kind words i really appreciate itxxx

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