I already read the story last time, and i liked it. To be honest i really, really liked it. The thing is that i think you make a lot of descriptions in this new version, and so when you keep reading the story, the rythm becomes slower and the reading becomes heavier. I like the plot, but to be honest with you there are so many details that makes the reading boring. I'm not talking about details like when you describe the scene where Spike and Buffy are in the second floor and they approach and they want to kiss each other and she suddenly asks him if he doesn't have a girlfriend; no, those kind of details were ok, what bothered me is that you go back and forth, back and forth in the story, so you kind of "cut" the rythm, and i personally don't like that. Too many followed flashbacks. I really liked the plot yeah, and the new things you added to the story so far. I'll try to keep reading further in the story and give you a better criticism. Sorry if i was harsh right now, I'm really tired and just wanted to write a review to this story before i went to bed :P lol. Nite and keep writing such great stories, I'm sure there are readers who appreciate your work much more. Don't take it personal, it's just a constructive POV.

I loved her comeback to Dru's lil comment! So awesome!

Oooh, major sparkage. Love it. =)

great update i loved it

I like reading more about what Spike went through right after the big break up. Adds a lot to the story. Even if I pretty much know what's going to happen, the extra details just make it seem like new. Love it!