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Reviewer: Tahmoe Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2005 - 07:44 pm Title: Raging Emotions

I'm so pissed at myself. I was shocked to read she was pregnant, wondering what the hell just happened. I read the last chapter and totally missed it. I had to go back and reread the part about the nurse mentioning the baby. I'm such a loser. Anyway, this chapter was sad minus these two people who are obviously in love fighting like the Buffyverse. I guessing she got pregnant when they had that quicky against the car or maybe that night when he bit her. Anyway, excellent chapter and update as soon as you get back. Have fun on your trip.

Reviewer: Lindsay Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2005 - 07:32 pm Title: Raging Emotions

okay, admittedly ive been following this fic for awhile but ive been off, so i havent left a review. I hope this makes up for it. This is one of the best fucken stories ive read here so far. It's emotional and cold at the same time. But thats life, maybe not the situation their in but the feeligns and hardships their going through is dead on. I am so impressed with your abilities to capture real life romance and hurt, it really astounds me. every chap has me wanting more and more and i never know what the next will bring, which is a good thing in my books. Angel is the perfect bad man and Spike is the perfect bad guy/good guy. No guy is perfect and i think youve done an excellent job portraying that. To top it off Buffy herself is the epitamy of a woman, fucked up and just trying to deal with things as best as she thinks she can. Wonderful job, i really really mean it. This fic is amazing and i cant wait for the next update. XOX Linz

Reviewer: spuffette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2005 - 06:42 pm Title: Raging Emotions

Oh, goody! Spike is so gonna kick Angel's stupid ass!!! Yeah! Oh, thanks for having Buffy tell Spike it was his, right off. Sometimes the 'who's' the daddy thing goes on too long! Great chapter, as usual. spuf

Reviewer: Elanor Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2005 - 06:37 pm Title: Raging Emotions

Ohhhhhhh -- this is gonna be crazy, I can't wait for more!!

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2005 - 06:34 pm Title: Raging Emotions

Have fun on your trip!
Buffy noticed that Spike was near, huh? She seems to have a sixth sense about that. Oh my.. what will Spike feel when he notice that it was him that had blown Buffy up - and lead to Angelus killing the baby? Loved how they found comfort in the grieve from the other. Till next week!

Reviewer: baby spikes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2005 - 06:28 pm Title: Raging Emotions

awww... such a sweet chapter... can't wait for more!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: 3988Akasha Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2005 - 06:22 pm Title: Raging Emotions

Aw, an almost make up scene! I love how you're keeping it real between the characters and not making it overly lovey-dovey. It's just like two people in their situation would react and I love you for it. I really do want to see Angelus get is pansy ass kicked. The bastard.

Reviewer: Franchesca Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2005 - 06:03 pm Title: Raging Emotions

Wow.... and it gets even better. You're so good at this. You played that conversation so well. I never would have thought to have him think it was Angel's.. and to then confirm she didn't really know. And that he even came to see her thinking it was Angel's baby.

Reviewer: Slayerette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2005 - 05:41 pm Title: Raging Emotions

Fantastic chapter - as always. One thing though - i felt as if you hadn't really portrayed Spike's emotions when he found out that he was the father of the child. Is he really supposed to be that cold?

Author's Response: Spike thought the baby was Angel's, so yes, he was supposed to be cold and indifferent at first. Glad you liked it- thanks for the review :-)

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