I really liked the prequel. But...

I've only walked out of two movies in my life. I've only thrown three books away. I'm quitting this story now. It's too contorted and convoluted for me to follow anymore and I just don't see the point. If you ever get around to reworking the story I might give it another try. As it stands, you're expecting much too much effort and patience from your readers with no payoff in sight.

Author's Response: I put in as much effort, perhaps more than you have, in writing this story. I saw it through to it's conclusion. I'm sorry that you don't feel that the time you've invested isn't worth the payoff. And, I am sorry to lose you. But I will be leaving the story as it stands.

Ha, Angel bit the big one. I might care in other stories, but in yours I don't.

Author's Response: I'm not sure, is that a compliment? ;-) I'm gonna take it as one anyway.

Whether Angel stays dust or not... gotta love the thought of Angel getting what he deserves. Things are really getting exciting now. Can't wait for more! Great chapter... I just love this story! :-)

Author's Response: Thanks M.G. I thought he deserved it by now, too.