Reviews For Vanishing Point
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Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/25/2005 - 09:53 pm Title: Promises

Merry Christmas to you too. :)

You're jumping again. First we see catatonic Buffy when Angel took Joni. But then it's later when Spike is dead and Joni found Homer. And Buffy meets him in Homer's body. Willow opened a portal that makes that Spike will follow Joni. So that's the reason he jumps a lot? But at last Buffy woke up!

Author's Response: I tried to let you know when time had passed with the use of dates. Also rememeber that not all dimensions have a linear time flow.

Reviewer: ChrissieLinnit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/23/2005 - 03:33 pm Title: Promises

My, oh my... sometimes this is so heartbreaking. Even before the time so far in their future. Seeing Spike so torn by Buffy's vegitative state and knowing what's to come is even more painful makes it hard to breath...

I love this story but I so enjoy getting to the end of the chapter and drawing in a deep breath... and then I prepare myself for the wait until the next installment.

Great work, pet. I do hope you're still enjoying this as much as we readers are. Have a great Christmas Season.

Author's Response: Thanks Chrissie! I'm so glad to know that you still love this story. I know leaving a comment can be scary...but it's the only way writers here will get through writer's block. Thanks so much for taking the time.

Reviewer: M.G. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/23/2005 - 11:58 am Title: Promises

Fantastic update. You really made me feel Spike's loneliness, despair and anger. I liked your use of Lorne in the chapter. Spike's words to Joni really have me intrigued. I'm glad Spike and Buffy finally found each other. Can't wait till the next update to find out what happens next! Merry Christmas!!!

Author's Response: A lot is happening soon. It could get very interesting.:-)

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