Date: 02/12/2013 - 12:47 am Title: Chapter 11
Absolutely lovely. So touching, I cried regularly at the early chapters' demonstration of Buffy's & Dawn's grief. Sweet ending, but an epilogue or just another chapter would be nice, so we can see how Buffy & Spike's relationship goes. Thought the story was marked NC-17, but there wasn't any smuttiness, that I could see, unless it was Willow's tittilation during her magicking. Some grammar errors, but mostly nit-picky. Other than that, extremely well-written.
Date: 10/11/2006 - 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 11
Oh so sad.. and then so happy. She should have known though... magic always has consequences!
Date: 09/23/2006 - 12:28 am Title: Chapter 11
OMG. I just read your story today and I have to apoligise for not reading it before. It what wonderful. I could not stop reading. Wonderful story, great original plot. I love it.
Date: 09/19/2006 - 03:23 am Title: Chapter 11
Well, wasn't expecting quite that ending. But I really like it. Glad to see all those ends tied up. Glad they have each other. Really did love it. Thanks for sharing.
Date: 09/16/2006 - 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 11
Very nice story! I liked the ending so much :)
Date: 09/16/2006 - 04:35 pm Title: Chapter 11
Very nice ending. :D
Date: 09/16/2006 - 11:54 am Title: Chapter 11
Seemed like a bit of an abrupt ending...you could have made it last longer I think. Anyway, I am sure that I remeber this story - you must have posted it elsewhere. Still a good read.