your story sucked you made it dirty and creepy and it didnt have to be!
I had to stop reading this. The idea of hank and summers practically playing matchmakers between the 26 yr spike and their 16 yr old daughter is beyond ridiculous and I can't overlook it one more chapter. It's such a shame, I liked a lot of the rest of the story.
I loved, loved, loved this story, but I HATE the ending. Give me more to it. Something else has to happen. This story still has SOOO much untapped potential.
D'awww. It's so sweet and veryyy well written so far. (: Typical teenage boys. >:O
next please :D
I love you.
Love it!
Great story... but the ending is... well, lacking.
oh, Dru is bloody irresistible :) I am enjoying the story so far, but I really don't buy Buffy's parents being so supportive of her relationship with Spike
the story was ok till the ending it's like you lost it what happened?
This story started out sooo good. And then it was like, WTF? Too bad it ended that way.
I don't normally leave comments because I don't know what to say. But I am liking this story so much that i had to take a moment to thank you for writing it . I can't wait to see what happens next!
:) i loved it.....ending was a bit of a let down..but non the less the story was awesome....it'd be kool if you wrote a sequel.:):) *fav's*
OH I like this. A lot!
I really like your story, but I have a friend who's mormon and they definantly don't have five wives. She's freakish about people knowing the truth. All those tv shows about polygimists, those people are not mormon. My friend says her church is totally against them, and that they haven't done that for like two hundred years, or something like that. Like I said I really like your story, but I though you should know that you're helping to spread lies.
I just found this and read it all the way through in one sitting. It was very good up until the last few chapters. It felt like the ending was really rushed.
Sorry honey, not a very good fic. It had its moments but too much inconsistencies in the plot and overall characterisation. Too many out-of-character traits and conversation that wasn't needed. Started out promising, but it seemed to get away from you after a while and just got way too messy. I feel a little cheated ;)
Awwww. This was such a bittersweet ending. They were broken up for so long and you end it with the possible promise of a new beginning. I can't say it's what I was hoping for but it was beautiful and it did fit. Wonderful story sweetie.
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A whole year... and Buffy's moved on with Owen, REALLY moved on, and that's so sad.
*cries* This is soooo sad! They HAVE to work this out. You're killing me!
Oh NO! *wails* This is just heartbreaking!
NO FREAKIN' WAY! That's just evil! ARRRGH! I'm soooo glad I fell behind now, there's no way I would've been able to wait this out!
Awww! I like that the carpet guy warmed to them in the end, despite Buffy's earlier bitching! Great chapter.
Beautiful chapter. I was worred about the 'morning after' reaction but you didn't disappoint. There was nervousness there but nothing huge enough to warrant a break up or anything scary like that! I'm glad they don't regret what happened. Lovely chapter.
The way you dealt with the sex scene was gorgeous sweetie, I loved it. Really. Sometimes a lack of detail is sooooo much better than full blown description, and this was one of those instances. Fantastic chapter.