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Reviewer: gotkona Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2006 - 02:53 am Title: Twenty-Eight

You did a great job but now I am curious what is gonna happen so please update.

Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2006 - 02:14 am Title: Twenty-Eight

Oookay. I hadn't expected that but if that's how you want to play it that's fine by me. I wonder what will come of our intrepid duo next.

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2006 - 02:09 am Title: Twenty-Eight

good update

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2006 - 12:57 am Title: Twenty-Eight

Oh, boy......yeah, that's definitely going to have consequences.

Reviewer: kitty Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2006 - 12:57 am Title: Twenty-Eight

no it was great. now update soon want to know how it ends.

Reviewer: *bite me* Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2006 - 12:36 am Title: Twenty-Eight

iT'S OKAY IF YOU DIDN'T WANT TO PUL GRAPHIC! It was stil good and you should feel proud. Please update soon!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2006 - 12:17 am Title: Twenty-Eight

Wonderfully written chapter! Please update soon!

Reviewer: riahannon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2006 - 11:53 pm Title: Twenty-Eight

don't worry, it was perfect and still meaningful/sexy withought the details, we've all read enough Spuffy-i'm sure- to fill in blanks
thanks for the update!

Reviewer: Chakal Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2006 - 11:22 pm Title: Twenty-Eight

Honestly, you didn't chicken out. Since this whole storyline isn't based on the hawt secks scenes, the angle and perspective you took really fit together with everything else! Of course, about the storyline itself... they made a mistake because now Spike's in danger, obviously. But come on... like they could hold out for that long! =)
I really loved this chapter, and I'm just itching to read what happens when they both wake up.

Reviewer: flibble Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2006 - 11:03 pm Title: Twenty-Eight

I don't think you chickened out with this chapter at all. I really liked the angle you used for the love scene. The whole 'I didn't mean to' thing. It was very well written. Not all sex scenes need to be graphic and this one shows why to perfection. Well done.

Reviewer: cee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2006 - 10:35 pm Title: Twenty-Eight

It was a fine chapter! We don't need the graphic sex scenes...you're too far above them in this story. Keep it coming!!!

Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2006 - 10:32 pm Title: Twenty-Eight

If she gets pregnant then yeah, big mistake there. I'm all okay with pregnancy in stories and all that, but it's never good when it's with a teenager. Hopefully that's not where you're going with this, but I do dread the angst that I'm sure is going to come. I really like how you wrote that scene, a graphic sex scene wasn't even necessary. I'll try to wait patiently for what comes next. Good chapter=)

Reviewer: StrawberryJam Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2006 - 10:10 pm Title: Twenty-Eight

No need to be nervous, this is still really good. Besides, a sex scene wouldn't fit in there anyways. Update soon please!

Reviewer: effection Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2006 - 09:47 pm Title: Twenty-Eight

no, i think you're right. A graphic sex scene wouldn't be appropriate. I had the same problem when i was writing ALG,... sometimes it's better when it's more simplistic... it seems more personal and precious that way. I think you did a great job. can't wait for more!

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