Date: 04/12/2006 - 02:53 am Title: Twenty-Eight
You did a great job but now I am curious what is gonna happen so please update.
Date: 04/12/2006 - 02:14 am Title: Twenty-Eight
Oookay. I hadn't expected that but if that's how you want to play it that's fine by me. I wonder what will come of our intrepid duo next.
Date: 04/12/2006 - 02:09 am Title: Twenty-Eight
good update
Date: 04/12/2006 - 12:57 am Title: Twenty-Eight
Oh, boy......yeah, that's definitely going to have consequences.
Date: 04/12/2006 - 12:57 am Title: Twenty-Eight
no it was great. now update soon want to know how it ends.
Date: 04/12/2006 - 12:36 am Title: Twenty-Eight
iT'S OKAY IF YOU DIDN'T WANT TO PUL GRAPHIC! It was stil good and you should feel proud. Please update soon!
Date: 04/12/2006 - 12:17 am Title: Twenty-Eight
Wonderfully written chapter! Please update soon!
Date: 04/11/2006 - 11:53 pm Title: Twenty-Eight
don't worry, it was perfect and still meaningful/sexy withought the details, we've all read enough Spuffy-i'm sure- to fill in blanks
thanks for the update!
Date: 04/11/2006 - 11:22 pm Title: Twenty-Eight
Honestly, you didn't chicken out. Since this whole storyline isn't based on the hawt secks scenes, the angle and perspective you took really fit together with everything else! Of course, about the storyline itself... they made a mistake because now Spike's in danger, obviously. But come on... like they could hold out for that long! =)
I really loved this chapter, and I'm just itching to read what happens when they both wake up.
Date: 04/11/2006 - 11:03 pm Title: Twenty-Eight
I don't think you chickened out with this chapter at all. I really liked the angle you used for the love scene. The whole 'I didn't mean to' thing. It was very well written. Not all sex scenes need to be graphic and this one shows why to perfection. Well done.
Date: 04/11/2006 - 10:35 pm Title: Twenty-Eight
It was a fine chapter! We don't need the graphic sex scenes...you're too far above them in this story. Keep it coming!!!
Date: 04/11/2006 - 10:32 pm Title: Twenty-Eight
If she gets pregnant then yeah, big mistake there. I'm all okay with pregnancy in stories and all that, but it's never good when it's with a teenager. Hopefully that's not where you're going with this, but I do dread the angst that I'm sure is going to come. I really like how you wrote that scene, a graphic sex scene wasn't even necessary. I'll try to wait patiently for what comes next. Good chapter=)
Date: 04/11/2006 - 10:10 pm Title: Twenty-Eight
No need to be nervous, this is still really good. Besides, a sex scene wouldn't fit in there anyways. Update soon please!
Date: 04/11/2006 - 09:47 pm Title: Twenty-Eight
no, i think you're right. A graphic sex scene wouldn't be appropriate. I had the same problem when i was writing ALG,... sometimes it's better when it's more simplistic... it seems more personal and precious that way. I think you did a great job. can't wait for more!