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Reviewer: spufette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2006 - 02:57 am Title: Twenty-Eight

Boy, do I get the chickening out part! Sex scenes scare me for some reason.
Anyway, I hope to God that these two don't pay too dear a price...
spuf

Reviewer: gotkona Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2006 - 02:53 am Title: Twenty-Eight

You did a great job but now I am curious what is gonna happen so please update.

Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2006 - 02:14 am Title: Twenty-Eight

Oookay. I hadn't expected that but if that's how you want to play it that's fine by me. I wonder what will come of our intrepid duo next.

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2006 - 02:09 am Title: Twenty-Eight

good update

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2006 - 12:57 am Title: Twenty-Eight

Oh, boy......yeah, that's definitely going to have consequences.

Reviewer: kitty Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2006 - 12:57 am Title: Twenty-Eight

no it was great. now update soon want to know how it ends.

Reviewer: *bite me* Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2006 - 12:36 am Title: Twenty-Eight

iT'S OKAY IF YOU DIDN'T WANT TO PUL GRAPHIC! It was stil good and you should feel proud. Please update soon!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2006 - 12:17 am Title: Twenty-Eight

Wonderfully written chapter! Please update soon!

Reviewer: riahannon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2006 - 11:53 pm Title: Twenty-Eight

don't worry, it was perfect and still meaningful/sexy withought the details, we've all read enough Spuffy-i'm sure- to fill in blanks
thanks for the update!

Reviewer: Chakal Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2006 - 11:22 pm Title: Twenty-Eight

Honestly, you didn't chicken out. Since this whole storyline isn't based on the hawt secks scenes, the angle and perspective you took really fit together with everything else! Of course, about the storyline itself... they made a mistake because now Spike's in danger, obviously. But come on... like they could hold out for that long! =)
I really loved this chapter, and I'm just itching to read what happens when they both wake up.

Reviewer: flibble Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2006 - 11:03 pm Title: Twenty-Eight

I don't think you chickened out with this chapter at all. I really liked the angle you used for the love scene. The whole 'I didn't mean to' thing. It was very well written. Not all sex scenes need to be graphic and this one shows why to perfection. Well done.

Reviewer: cee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2006 - 10:35 pm Title: Twenty-Eight

It was a fine chapter! We don't need the graphic sex scenes...you're too far above them in this story. Keep it coming!!!

Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2006 - 10:32 pm Title: Twenty-Eight

If she gets pregnant then yeah, big mistake there. I'm all okay with pregnancy in stories and all that, but it's never good when it's with a teenager. Hopefully that's not where you're going with this, but I do dread the angst that I'm sure is going to come. I really like how you wrote that scene, a graphic sex scene wasn't even necessary. I'll try to wait patiently for what comes next. Good chapter=)

Reviewer: StrawberryJam Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2006 - 10:10 pm Title: Twenty-Eight

No need to be nervous, this is still really good. Besides, a sex scene wouldn't fit in there anyways. Update soon please!

Reviewer: effection Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2006 - 09:47 pm Title: Twenty-Eight

no, i think you're right. A graphic sex scene wouldn't be appropriate. I had the same problem when i was writing ALG,... sometimes it's better when it's more simplistic... it seems more personal and precious that way. I think you did a great job. can't wait for more!

Reviewer: kitty Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2006 - 02:19 am Title: Twenty-Seven

you are evil lol. please don't make me wait to long to see how it ends.

Author's Response: LOL. I really am. *g*

Reviewer: LMBossy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2006 - 07:39 pm Title: Twenty-Seven

excellent chapter! love Willow and Fred's revenge fetish - but *eep* for angsting Buffy - just hope Spike doesn't dive in with the wrong thing to say and make it ten times worse

Author's Response: ...it might not be Spike, but there is trouble coming. ;) Thanks for reviewing, sweetie!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2006 - 04:50 pm Title: Twenty-Seven

Awe, protective friends *gg* Good to have them. And it's good that Fred is there now :) Loved the chapter, all the girls talk (marriage) made Buffy think... Well she still has time and hasn't decide anything now.

Author's Response: Thanks. =) And yep, she does still have time...we'll see what she does with it, lol.

Reviewer: flibble Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2006 - 10:29 pm Title: Twenty-Seven

Great chapter. Really well written. I'm glad that Buffy isn't ignoring the obvious complications of their relationship and what it means for their future. It shows her maturity. Looking forward to their dinner date.

Author's Response: Thank you! And yeah, I wanted to show that neither of them is stupid enough to just rush into this...for the most part. *g*

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2006 - 09:14 pm Title: Twenty-Seven

Great chapter! Wonder what is going through Spike's mind.

Author's Response: *g* You'll find out soon. ;) Thanks!

Reviewer: Heidi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2006 - 07:43 pm Title: Twenty-Seven

Loved the chapter.
Hope Buffy will be strong enough to handle this.
I understand the age thing is a big problem but I hope they can solve it.
in Finland it is legal for over 16 year old to be intimate with someone who's also over 16 but I understand how it could cause them so much trouble.

Author's Response: *nods* The US has some of the more prudish laws regarding age of consent...they'll work it out, but it'll take some doing. Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: Nemo Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2006 - 05:44 pm Title: Twenty-Seven

Read this yesterday, but didn't have time to review then. I'm doing it now, so you don't think I've abandoned you :P

If she's strong enough for this really seems to be the question. Although I don't think Spike will propose to her, they really have to fight to be together. He is a lot older and may want to settle down and she's still so young. (Although some may not think so, in Sweden you can get married at 16 if you get an approval from the king (?!) *lol* ...the benefits of living in a monarchy *rolls eyes* sorry, off topic)

Loved the talk between Buffy and Willow in the beginning, and I agree with Buff: Willow is spending too much time with Faith! She's gettign real tough! *lol*

And isn't Hank just the typical father with his "no sex" *lol*

/ Nina aka nemo_88




Author's Response: *dances* You know, I kinda love your for the thoughtful reviewing. You rock. *picks you up and spins you around* And LMAO at the Sweden bit. Buffy and Spike are definitely going to go through some rough spots before they get their happy ending...but they will. ;) And hee, protective!Willow amuses me--probably why I write her that way.

Thanks so much for the lovely feedback, hun! ♥

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2006 - 04:05 pm Title: Twenty-Seven

Ahhh..I just wish that we could send this story forward to when Buffy turns 18 so we can cut with the legal mumbo jumbo.. I know that it's illegal..and No I do not want my daughters to be with a man 10 years older at age 16...but this is a FICTIONAL story about BUffy and Spike..SO let's talk about the emotional implications of this rather than the legal side of it..ya know?

Poor Buffy..She seems so conflicted right now...For every positive thought she has, it seems to be followed with a negative feeling. I think if Spike understands that she is so conflicted he won't push her..Right? lol Looking forward to your next update!

Author's Response: Oh, there'll be emotional implications...part of the point of this fic is to explore why those laws are in place...and yep, Buffy and Spike are both conflicted. Thank you for the feedback!

Reviewer: StrawberryJam Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2006 - 02:25 pm Title: Twenty-Seven

Ooh, angsty. Update soon please? *puppy-dog eyes* Please? Really good, keep at it! :-)

Author's Response: *smiles* Updating today, thank you!

Reviewer: spufette Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2006 - 01:47 pm Title: Twenty-Seven

Oh, Buffy, try to be strong enough for this, please!
I'm not totally on board with this underage Spuffy thing, I am in the US (we're really pretty prudish you know!)
Anyway, I do love Spuffy and they seem to care for each other so. So......
I'm so glad your'e updating this story so much!
spuf

Author's Response: Oh, I know--I live in the US. ;) And thank you! Glad you're enjoying it.

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