Date: 09/09/2007 - 08:57 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
If I havn't read your story before, I would think Joyce was the best mommy in the world, just understood. A really sweet bd for Buffy.
Date: 11/22/2006 - 07:06 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
oh that was so intense....
Date: 05/21/2006 - 11:48 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
ahhh, I love the locket. This is a really sweet chapter. good job
Date: 02/16/2006 - 01:25 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
You know, my sixteenth birthday didn't go how I wanted either. I wasn't even home for it. Made me a little jealous that Elizabeth has such a great family that, even in those times, would give her a day devoted to only her. I wish my own had done that.
Date: 02/14/2006 - 05:23 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
Okay, maybe I'm slightly more optimistic now. So glad she came for the big day.
Date: 11/20/2005 - 10:09 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
Okay, you know I love this story. But I kind of skipped most of this chapter. I've seen the episode a number of times so I just read the bits where we got to see Elizabeth's thoughts. *shrug* Sorry. Looking forward to more chapters and some spuffy.
Author's Response: I knew you'd all be getting sick of the rewrites soon, so not to worry, this is actually the last full-blown one. You'll still be hearing about the slayerverse though, just not as extensively and only how it pertains to the characters in the attic.
Date: 11/19/2005 - 12:45 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
In a way I still can't believe that Joyce is right: She neglects her children and thinks that is the right thing to do. And now she's there. The silver locket was a nice gift!
Date: 11/19/2005 - 06:07 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
Wow that was such a good surprise.So buffy had a wounderful birthday after all.This has been so intence.I, happy to be back.I almost didn't make it,they had trouble sendin me my new password.But at long last they did and I am hear.Love- this fic.
Date: 11/18/2005 - 07:24 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
I love this story So much and freaked out the other day when I couldn't read it without being registered. Then it said I had to pay $5 just to read but it was a mistake thank goodness! lol I check for updates all the time and haven't seen the story anywhere else. I'm glad that Joyce seems to really love her children. I like how you have put in parts of the Buffyverse stuff in William's stories. Well can't wait for more!
Date: 11/16/2005 - 07:31 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
I just found read through the story, having shied away from it before. I am still a little unsure of how I am going to feel about a differents sort of relationship between the two, I am loving how you have crafted the characters. I didn't read through the reviews, but I am wondering why none of the characters have addressed the fact that the mother could have tried to work before giving in. Plenty of people have to live like that. I know that they mentioned it at the beginning, but Elizabeth being who she is, wouldn't she have thought again about a possibility besides this? Of course these are your characters and your story which I really like, but I was just wondering about that one thing.
Author's Response: I absolutely agree with you that if this was real life she definitely would have been able to go to work in order to care for her family. Both William and Elizabeth touched on them getting jobs to help out as well, but if this happened, there would be no need for the story as this is about them being stuck in the attic. So you just need to suspend belief a bit in order for the plot to work. Thanks for the review and I hope you stick with it despite the subject matter.
Date: 11/16/2005 - 02:53 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
Sorry, I have this small problem with William thinking it's "manly" to be able to bench 75lbs. Wimpy girls at my high school could do at least 85. it's the only problem I've had with the whole story so far. Everything else is great, keep it up, and keep updating.
Author's Response: I love this review!! I was actually having trouble deciding how much he should be able to bench press because I had no idea what was considered normal. I was trying to get across that he was nerdy so he wasn't very strong. I guess I went overboard!
Date: 11/16/2005 - 01:31 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
Hmm. She still sucks lol. Love the easy banter with Will and Buffy. Very excited for more, keep up the great work :)
Date: 11/16/2005 - 12:50 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
Great chapter. I wonder if William had anything to do with Joyce showing up. Looking forward to more, soon I hope!
Date: 11/16/2005 - 05:03 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
Great chapter. Looking forward to more william and Elizabeth time.
Date: 11/16/2005 - 01:45 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
Aww... :tear: That was a really good chapter! I really like how you have created their own identities. Is Spike going to, eventually, turn into Spike? I cant wait till we get to the Spuffy! Can we get their soon, please!Loved it! :) Lighter
Date: 11/16/2005 - 01:30 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
that was good!! i loved it!! im so glad you posted!! i have been waiting forever!! i cant get enough and hope you update soon!!!
~MarstersGirl13