Elizabeth was kind of insane for accusing William, but yeah, she was angry and took it out on him. Poor kids. I have to say that Joyce is a really selfish woman. My parents didn't get along and had lots of fights. At times they would get along and it would spook me, since I'm used to them angry with each other. But my dad died when I was 16, and mom cried and cried and was upset for a year. Then she got a boyfriend. Actually, I'm not upset she did, 'cause I knew that even though at times she liked, maybe even loved my dad, she would move on. But Hank is suppose to be Joyce's love of her life, t he man she left her parents for. If Hank was anything like the father in the book, Hank must of spoiled Joyce. I know where the story is going, but it's sad how Joyce just abandons her kids.

is joyce drifting away from her old life, leaving her children alone?

Really loving this story so far, and very much looking forward to the next chapter.

Seems as if Joyce is really forgetting her children. No hugs, no kisses. Poor kids.

That bit with Joyce was a bit disturbing. If she and Wes were getting that close you'd think she would try to give him some clues. If she is coming back right before X-mas then what about the plan... I look foward to your next update.

Well I don't know about the rest of you,but i for one am getting sick of there mother.She is out living it high,while her children live in a Attic!"I am getting bery sick of the mother thing.This just gets darker and darker!"But you still got me,and I keep waiting for the next chapter. Hugs, Marla

great update!! it's starting isn't it?? mmm though i'm not crazy with about it...who am i kidding...spuffy is spuffy... i love the way you write!! it's fantastic and i love the way you're unrolling the story... it just explains everything... thanx so much!!

well, there was some st there now wasn't there? must be very disturbing to find out your mom is going to have sex..i can't even think of my parents doing it lol. I was concieved by immaculate conception lol