Date: 09/09/2007 - 11:19 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
that tummy rubbing was so sexy. I do hope the kids find out the whole story at the end.
Date: 02/14/2006 - 06:19 am Title: Chapter Twenty
They really raise quite a few good points about their parents. Wonder what really happened back in the day.
Date: 12/13/2005 - 09:23 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
Great chapter! Please update soon!
Date: 12/12/2005 - 07:01 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
Yep its me Irishwoman39 I had to chage my Penn name and password, because I was shut out again.I hope the new Name and pass word sticks this time.Now getting back to the story at last,more seems to be revield. and its getting more intense.Marla
Date: 12/12/2005 - 03:09 am Title: Chapter Twenty
Ahhh... okay, I can't gaurentee that I'll patiently wait for the next chappy, but I'll wait. Loving it so far. Really doing a great job with the story.!
Date: 12/11/2005 - 12:52 am Title: Chapter Twenty
ok... you hinted so many things, and then let us wondering? that's cruel, you konw! not sudden as a cliffhanger... but now the seed of doubt is firmly planted in our minds! (ok... that's a typical italian expression... i hope it'll make sense!!)
And i just love the way you are developing the intimacy between them! there will be William pov as well? keep going 'cos u're doing great!
Author's Response: The story will be completely Elizabeth's POV. I think I'd get confused if I started writing William's POV too. Thanks for the review!
Date: 12/10/2005 - 07:19 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
Ohhhhh. Nice one. Enjoying the slow development of this story.
Date: 12/10/2005 - 12:51 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
They are getting closer every chapter it seems.
Date: 12/10/2005 - 10:14 am Title: Chapter Twenty
They shouldn't hear what Drusilla says to them - the way they are treated there I wouldn't believe what they tell me. And the attraction started, huh?
Date: 12/10/2005 - 07:12 am Title: Chapter Twenty
Damn! it's started, hasn't it? there's no turning back... i love your writing, though it's a really touchy subject... but shoot me i love it ;) thanx for the early update!!
Date: 12/10/2005 - 05:21 am Title: Chapter Twenty
I loved it!!! I really cant wait to see what they find out about their parents! I love it when you post! It makes me want to go post Rainbow in the Dark! I also love it how William is the big brother everyone wishes they have/had. Nice Spuffy Scene! I really hope we get more of this! Please post soon! I loved it! I am so happy that you decided to post this! You are such an awesome author and I cant wait to see what you will continue to give us in the future! :) Lighter
Date: 12/10/2005 - 04:15 am Title: Chapter Twenty
Great chapter...Looks like they are getting comfortable with their touches.
Great chapter!
Date: 12/10/2005 - 03:58 am Title: Chapter Twenty
aww that was sooo sweeeeet! i loved it!
your amazingg!!!=]
update soon please!
Date: 12/10/2005 - 03:51 am Title: Chapter Twenty
I just love how close they are becoming with each other. Looking forward to the next update.
Date: 12/10/2005 - 03:46 am Title: Chapter Twenty
You really know how to give us UST. I mean, god, I'm drying here!! LOL. Just a simple action and I'm holding my breath in anticipation. My question is . . . Does Willaim know what he's doing? Does he feel things for her in that way or is he just being overly affectionate b/c of their circumstances? I guess I'm wondering if he's aware of his not so innocent touching.
Author's Response: I don't think he realizes it - he thinks he's providing brotherly comfort, but subconsciously he wants her.
Date: 12/10/2005 - 03:41 am Title: Chapter Twenty
And into the trap they go. . . . like innocent little lambs. . . .