Date: 09/10/2007 - 12:02 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
poor Will and Elizabeth
Date: 11/24/2006 - 08:17 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
Ohh I thought we were going to get smut
Date: 11/24/2006 - 08:17 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
Ohh I thought we were going to get smut
Date: 02/16/2006 - 11:14 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
I think that William has too much faith in Joyce. It seems like she's abandoning her children for a new life, using shamelessly the excuse of pleasing her father. Does she even realize what she's doing? I can't help but lose trust in her, just like Elizabeth.
Date: 02/14/2006 - 06:33 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
Well, as dire as it seems, it stands to reason that missing Chrismas with Daddy would be a big tip off that she had a secret. But William, just a bit too optimistic. Hope things work out, but then if they do, we wouldn't have this intense suddle sparkage. Lead on, either way. Amazing chapter.
Date: 12/19/2005 - 12:55 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
Great chapter! Can't say I love their mother too much....Please update soon!
Date: 12/18/2005 - 04:18 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
Omg,Losing my breath here :P..
Date: 12/18/2005 - 04:40 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
Poor Spike and Buffy.How can Joyce do her children that way.Time and Time again she disapoints them,and as it has been stated where are they going to go.What else could happen.Joyce is a no show again.This is getting darker!"
Date: 12/18/2005 - 01:19 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
that was so bittersweet!
any little touch, any hint of a kiss they share, and i crave more...
i now u shouldn't rush this story (i do think your timing's perfect!)... clearly the only solution is more updates! lol
just kidding... take your own time too... you're doing a great job!
Date: 12/18/2005 - 12:36 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
YAY! I am so glad that you posted! OMG! William is 18 years old!!! I think that he knows that what he did was wrong! But I liked it! LOL! I hope we get more of that! :) I think that there mother is just going out and having fun and forgetting about her kids. I hope Dawn and Connor have a good christmas! Please let us have some good spuffy time! We need it! LOL! Loved the chapter! This is such an awesome fic but, I would like to know more about the whole family situation and whats going on. Please post soon! :) Lighter
Author's Response: William is still 16. Did I say he was 18 somewhere b/c I want to fix it if I did so please let me know. He'll be having a birthday soon and I don't want everyone to be confused. Thanks!
Date: 12/18/2005 - 12:19 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
that was soo sweet!
i hope the spuffy love will grow from here?
i know slowly but hopefully it wont decrease..
update as soon as you can!
i will be watching and waiting for more!!!
loved it!
Date: 12/17/2005 - 08:59 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
Oh, poor William and Elizabeth trying to conceal their mother's absence from the twins. Oh, and they kissed! Yay! This story is beautifully written, I can't wait for more. :)
Date: 12/17/2005 - 08:28 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
Yay! Great chapter. Looking forward to things heating up between William and Elizabeth.
Date: 12/17/2005 - 07:48 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
You know, I hated the mother in the original story, and hey, nice to know nothing's really changed. . . .
Date: 12/17/2005 - 06:53 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
Well, well, well. . . holiday tradition doesn't dictate that you kiss your sister in such a manner under the miseltoe Will LOL. I held my breath at that part, so excited to read what he was going to do and how Elizabeth was going to react. Love it!!
Date: 12/17/2005 - 05:36 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
I like the story. Honestly, since you started this fic, I remembered the Dollanganger saga, which I had read while I was in my second year of High School, so I read it again in just a few weeks. I love the way you're writing it because even if it's based on flowers in the attic, there're so many different things that it looks another story. So good job. I can't wait till your next update.
Author's Response: I haven't read the book in over 15 years, but I'm dying to read it again since I started writing this too. I'm resisting though so I don't end up copying the storyline too closely. I'm glad you think it looks like another story because I definitely wanted to give it my own spin. Thanks for letting me know it's working!
Date: 12/17/2005 - 05:07 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
So Joyce has Wesley in her net - at last so it seems. But she didn't keep her word. Well... I didn't really think she would. We'll see what will happen now.
Date: 12/17/2005 - 05:06 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
what a great but sad story,I don't know weather the Mother is a strong or weak woman for keeping her children locked up in the attic while she tries to get back in the good books of Ethan,I'm sure if Wesley does love her like she says he would understand she has kids,poor kids locked up in the attic with only a visit from Adam and the creepy Dru!!
I do hope William finds a way to get them all away from the house.
but I do like this story!! thanks for the update.
Date: 12/17/2005 - 05:02 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
Another fine update. You are building suspense quite well (in all areas). Thanks.
Date: 12/17/2005 - 02:50 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
The poor kids, not having their mom with them on the holiday. The interaction between William and Beth was sweet at the end. I am looking forward to more. :)