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Date: 01/29/2006 - 09:39 pm Title: Prologue - Chapter One

Ok, here I am! Starting this story! =) Sounds awesome so far!

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Date: 12/14/2005 - 03:16 am Title: Prologue - Chapter One

Something I forgot to add...

I don't really think she deserves Spike. Because Spike loves her completely and will love her forever...while Buffy doesen't know what she feels for him and is still pining for the man whose admitted he never loved her and left her for another women within their first meeting of each other.

Spike has done nothing but be supportive of her and their daughter and in these last few chappies...making her as happy as he can, and he makes one mistake and she's ready to go back to square one and blame all her heartache on him...he didn't do this to her...and I hope she realizes that soon.

Don't know why she can't talk to Spike and at least hear him out, oh but she could with Angel. Buffy really needs to get her head cheked for that one.

Reviewer: katakata Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/13/2005 - 06:20 am Title: Prologue - Chapter One

Oooh and just a little afterthought...I know Spike's never been the 'man with a plan' or at least not a plan that works (seasons 2 and 4 prove it beyond reasonable doubt) but I mean really - keeping the letter AND putting it in the kitchen breadbox for safekeeping? Methinks he subconciously wanted Buffy to discover what he knew in order to get the truth out there as he'd dug himself into a hole he couldn't get out of! Like I said - just a thought.

Reviewer: Irishwoman39 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2005 - 03:29 am Title: Prologue - Chapter One

Ok good start,now I have to read on.

Reviewer: prophecygirrl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2005 - 11:43 pm Title: Prologue - Chapter One

Is Buffy dense as a post or what? But then, I've always wondered how she could resist the passionate, deeply loving man right in front of her. Not her most shining moments in this chapter, but I think she'll come around if she can stop lying to herself and others. A great update. Keep them coming, please!

Reviewer: prophecygirrl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2005 - 11:43 pm Title: Prologue - Chapter One

Is Buffy dense as a post or what? But then, I've always wondered how she could resist the passionate, deeply loving man right in front of her. Not her most shining moments in this chapter, but I think she'll come around if she can stop lying to herself and others. A great update. Keep them coming, please!

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/01/2005 - 12:08 pm Title: Prologue - Chapter One

Keep in mind, brown eyes dominate....I have a site I have marked that goes over eye colors of mother and father and the odds of how many kids will have what color eyes......had to go and change one of Giles and Jenny's kids eye color, for he and Jenny would never have a blue eyed child....by genetics.....there is a good chance she'd look like Buffy, but have brown eyes. http://www.athro.com/evo/inherit.html check it out I had such fun with it.....even if you do if fun against the guy you'd want to father your children, LOL.......

Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/01/2005 - 07:21 am Title: Prologue - Chapter One

Great a new story, sounds like a great plot as usual, looking forwrd to reading more.

Reviewer: lacey Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2005 - 09:42 pm Title: Prologue - Chapter One

loved this chapter although im wondering if Linds is Spike's or Angel's either way its great i just hope shes spikes even though that might cause alot of drama but who dosent need alittle drama in there life...lol....Great chapter update soon!!!!!

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2005 - 08:34 pm Title: Prologue - Chapter One

I'll try not to complain that Buffy is with Angel and Spike is with Fred - but its possible that I'll do it. Oh my.. they (Buffy and Spike) were together when 16 but had to part. Wonder what happened in between now and then. And what about Angel leaving with Fred? - on to the next chapter.

Reviewer: caatje Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2005 - 04:11 pm Title: Prologue - Chapter One

very interesting story. I like it! :-)

Reviewer: beasleysmom Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2005 - 04:08 pm Title: Prologue - Chapter One

OMG!!!! This is sooooo good! I can't wait to see how this will unfold! You are absolutely amazing! Kuddos!

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2005 - 04:08 pm Title: Prologue - Chapter One

oh this is really interesting. you gotta post soon. loved it. great job. great start.

Reviewer: Kar Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2005 - 04:02 pm Title: Prologue - Chapter One

You have me, but I'm confused. Please post more so I can dig out. What happened with Spike and Buffy in the past? What is the big deal of Angel leaving with Fred?

Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2005 - 03:51 pm Title: Prologue - Chapter One

Well, this is an interesting start. I'm a little confused, but I'm sure all will be explained. Hope you have more soon=)

Reviewer: Tara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2005 - 03:27 pm Title: Prologue - Chapter One

Interesting so far. I am guessing that the 16 year olds were not Buffy and Spike, but instead Fred and Angel?

Reviewer: spuffette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2005 - 03:24 pm Title: Prologue - Chapter One

Mmmm, suspense, angst, drama! Love it! spuf

Reviewer: lacey Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2005 - 03:23 pm Title: Prologue - Chapter One

so lovin this story its great please please update soon!!!

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2005 - 02:25 pm Title: Prologue - Chapter One

interesting twists and turns......who left who at 16. And so this is a rectangle instead of a triangle relationship thingy???????? Sounds like an interesting start.....just very confused, LOL.

Reviewer: prophecygirrl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2005 - 02:11 pm Title: Prologue - Chapter One

God, yes, woman, what happens next? Did they run off together??? Is Lindsay really Spike's? Please, I'm dyin' here!

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