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Reviewer: Caitie Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/12/2005 - 01:33 am Title: Chapter Eight

Great chapter - can't wait for more!!

Reviewer: spikesbabi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2005 - 11:29 pm Title: Chapter Eight

buffy just came right out with it didnt she? im glad that she's the first one to bring that subject up. i dont know why. great update!

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2005 - 09:04 pm Title: Chapter Eight

Oh ..money. I hope Angel didn't think of taking it. Well, the rest he knew of. Well I wonder what Buffy will do now. And yay for Angel gone :)

Reviewer: Whitelighter354 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2005 - 04:55 pm Title: Chapter Eight

YAY! Angels out of the picture!!! I want more! Please update soon! :) Lighter

Reviewer: Brunettepet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2005 - 01:21 pm Title: Chapter Eight

Buffy not leaning too readily in Spike is a good idea. She needs become independent again.

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2005 - 12:19 pm Title: Chapter Eight

I have to say that this is a hard one to read. To see Buffy not in love with Spike or not even in an advesarial relationship is very difficult. It so focused on Angel right now, and Angel is such a frustrating character on a good day. I can't even see how they'll ever be together in love on, especially on her side. Saying that, this is such a beautifully written story. I really am invested in these characters and care about what happen to them. The last chapter was especially heartbreaking. I am hooked and will keep coming back for more.

Reviewer: greyangel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2005 - 09:14 am Title: Chapter Eight

Okay, the lies are being aired...thank God, but how will the two of them tackle telling Lindsey...(I'm glad I'm not in their shoes)...Divorce would be a good first step to burying the dead marriage and help wipe the slate clean and give Spike the guilt free oppotunity to try and create a real place for himself in not just his child's life but Buffy's too...though I have a feeling she might try to resist a real relationship with him...probably out of a sense of guilt...though, only time and quiet persistance on Spike's part can alter that...you're brinning things realistically together and so far it's not being too easy for them...and neither should it be...not after years of decite by all adult parties...the child's welfare and emotional support should not be all these adults main focus...then and only then should they start to consider where they stand with each other...needless to say I'm loving it so far...the realistic stories always grip me...more soon, please!

Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2005 - 08:37 am Title: Chapter Eight

Great couple of chapters, I'm still a little confused on the flash backs and who she was talking to? but i'm sure it will all come out in the end

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2005 - 05:34 am Title: Chapter Eight

Love the new chapters. Looking forward to reading more soon. I am so loving this story!

Reviewer: Tahmoe Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2005 - 03:01 am Title: Chapter Eight

Buffy just came out with it about telling Lindsey...strange...I don't think she should tell Lindsey yet...I mean don't get me wrong the child should know but I think Buffy is in the right state of mind and I think Angel should be told first if he already doesn't know but something tells me he does and knows that Spike and Buffy should be together. Another good update and thanks for posting so quickly. Now do it again...lol

Reviewer: spufette Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2005 - 02:39 am Title: Chapter Eight

Hehehehe... can't wait for Spike to talk himself out of this one! I love this story, I just wish Buffy would come to the party and realize that Angel isn't worth the spit off of her right hand. (My big sister taught me that! The spit off my right hand that is!) spuf

Reviewer: prophecygirrl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2005 - 02:29 am Title: Chapter Eight

OK. Progress here. Good. Buffy has been through a lot, but she's right to try to take steps on her own rather than using Spike as a fallback. But god, it must have killed him to hear her say that Angel was the one she really wanted! I kept hoping you'd add: "to maim horribly," but then, that's me. Just trying to be patient while you get these two crazy kids together. I trust you, though. Again, the quick updates are wonderful. THANK YOU.

Reviewer: jennybean Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2005 - 02:17 am Title: Chapter Eight

I'm loving this two chapter update thing you've got going on. Great chapter - it will be interesting to see how Lindsey takes the news and what happens when Angel finds out.

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