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Reviewer: Lyns Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2006 - 11:15 pm Title: Twenty seven

awww.... you're breaking my heart here! nice to see an update for this - i guess it's one step closer to the much anticipated happy ending, right?

Reviewer: Natasha Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/13/2006 - 02:48 pm Title: Twenty seven

Hi Brat,

Can't wait for an update! Pleasssse....

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/28/2005 - 01:02 am Title: Twenty seven

Well, I certainly understand why Buffy feels like she's been very much deceived, however, I wonder if she'll eventually realize that the whole issue is what Angel told her on the phone - he never loved her! That's what she should be concentrating on. I hope she realizes that and lets Spike back in because I think she really loves him very much - if she didn't, his subtefuge couldn't hurt her so much. Such an awesome tale. I love it (had to play catch up over the last 3 chaps). More please! I'm on pins and needles to see how you resolve this and build Buffy's trust again. Poor Spike. LOVE IT SO MUCH - WRITE FAST PLEASE.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2005 - 08:15 pm Title: Twenty seven

Buffy's physical reaction to Spike even as she's hurt and disappointed with him bodes well for their reconciliation. I really liked her world weary request that Spike no longer make her promises except about Lindsey. What a harsh and bleak request to make. Nice job with the angst throughout this chapter.

Reviewer: bluebird Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/18/2005 - 12:43 pm Title: Twenty seven

So sad. Please write another chapter soon! Thanks!

Reviewer: Meagan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2005 - 08:10 pm Title: Twenty seven

Buffy needs to get off her high horse real quick before Spike sees what a selfish manipulating bitch she really is.
She kept his daughter away from her for years, letting another man raise her...of course he's scared to tell her what he knew about Fred, she probably would have kept him from Lindsay, making like shes protecting her when really she's really using her to hurt him the best way she knows how.
Its frustrating to see Spike on his hands and knees, begging her to hear him out, only asking a crumb from her..and she's won't give him the time or day. Only focusing in her hurt and how everyone hurts HER and that this only happened to HER. She wasn't honest with him for years and if he hadn't told her he knew Lindsay was his, she would never have told him. Spike knows, we know...but worst of all, Buffy knows it too. And doesen't care.

Her actions and attitude make me wanna puke because all Spike has done is be there for her and take her crap over and over...she better open her eyes soon and start begging for his forgiveness.

Reviewer: jennybean Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2005 - 03:16 pm Title: Twenty seven

That was so sad. I hope she listens to him when she gets home - they need to work this out.

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2005 - 10:06 am Title: Twenty seven

Oh my.. still so bittersweet. At last Spike could say the he was ready to turn around and leave but Angel saw Fred first... but Buffy didn't listen. Still too hurt. I wonder what hurt her the most... Spike not telling her maybe, not Spike bringing Fred. Looking forward to read on - the 'talk' should come soon, huh?

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2005 - 06:58 am Title: Twenty seven

i hope she lets him explain

Reviewer: katakata Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2005 - 06:23 am Title: Twenty seven

Thoroughly fascinating update...loved the insight gained from the redux of one of the earlier chapters using the benefit of our new knowledge and Spike's added internal monologue. I'm a fish happily flopping on your hook (hmmm...that comment seemed perfectly fine when I thought in my head but somehow seeing it in typescript makes me feel a little dirty LOL) 8-D

Reviewer: Whitelighter354 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2005 - 05:47 am Title: Twenty seven

ALLY!!!!! I finally got caught up! I am so sorry that I havent been keeping up with this! I love this fic so much but I have lots of stuff going on! You are a mastermind! LOL! I never would have figured that Spike would be in on this whole fiasco! I have cried twice! LOL! I really hope that Buffy listens to him and they can get some sort of understanding. Then. try to rebuild trust! Its a good thing that it takes a while! (More Chapters!) I LOVED IT! You are awesome with angst! : when reading, takes down notes!: I cant wait to see what you give us next! Please post soon! :) Lighter

Reviewer: sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2005 - 05:43 am Title: Twenty seven

yeah, i have to agree. buffy is just really not being fair. it is so wrong of her to blame him for that when what she has done has been a lot worse. she's really a bitch in this story and i can't say i care for her like that. she better come to her senses soon or she might really push him away. i think he deserves better.

Reviewer: luxferi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2005 - 05:40 am Title: Twenty seven

Great chapter, just things seem to be moving at a snail's pace here. Maybe it's with the recollection and all.

Update soon! ;)

Reviewer: Annette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2005 - 05:30 am Title: Twenty seven

Let me get this straight , Buffy, you expected Spike to approach you with what was happening the morning that Angel and Fred left - even though you were keeping his daughter from him and letting another man raise her as his own? Hey, you were BOTH wrong. Why are you acting like the only injured party and being the usual bitch to Spike? Even though you kept something monumental from him for 4 years, he doesn't treat you like shit. It's obvious you don't love Spike (probably can't love anybody as selfish as you are) but you don't treat people the way you do. You never even apologized for keeping Lindsey from him, yet you expect him to crawl at your feet because he kept something from you for 3 weeks? You are a mother for gods sakes - stop being so self-absorbed.

Reviewer: s[ikesbabi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2005 - 05:26 am Title: Twenty seven

left speechless...hope to be reading more soon

Reviewer: Winslowpenny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2005 - 05:17 am Title: Twenty seven

God, I hope Buffy grows up some and gets therapy before she gets in a relationship. Buffy's lies and sins are far greater than Spike's, yet she's never apologized for them. Spike apologizes constantly for his mistakes. Not a good sign that he regrets his mistakes while Buffy expects everybody to just "deal" with hers. The fact that they have both lied (Buffy's worse than Spike's ) and Buffy gets off trying to be self-righteous with her "I can't trust you - don't promise me anything" bullshit is sickening condsidering what she's done in the past. Understand that Spike loves her but can't really see why.

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