Reviews For Falling With Me
Reviewer: wiccangirl314 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2005 - 09:58 pm Title: Introduction
Date: 10/05/2005 - 09:58 pm Title: Introduction
This is a great start but I have a few pointers. Be careful with Capitilizations and where they should go, and grammer. You have quite a few run on sentences. These things take away from the plot, and your plot is amazing. With a little work, this story could really take off into something amazing. :-) Good luck on future installments!
Author's Response: Im sorry for my mistakes. I will try to work on them, let me know how i am doing. thanx!
Reviewer: Pari Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2005 - 12:17 pm Title: Introduction
Date: 10/05/2005 - 12:17 pm Title: Introduction
Good start, you may want to read through again, because there are quite a few typos, maybe use the spellcheck we have...I do look forward to reading more.
Reviewer: NEO_trinityknot Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2005 - 11:29 am Title: Introduction
Date: 10/05/2005 - 11:29 am Title: Introduction
I'm intrigued, more please. I think Hank's a nutter
Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2005 - 04:34 am Title: Introduction
Date: 10/05/2005 - 04:34 am Title: Introduction
good so far and cant wait to see spike
Reviewer: MarstersGirl13 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2005 - 03:50 am Title: Introduction
Date: 10/05/2005 - 03:50 am Title: Introduction
more soon. great so far. i want spike soon though.