He will be like a new man if she'll give him a new look :)

I very much enjoy this Buffy, and the calmer one the William seems to bring out in her. These two sure seem good for each other. A wonderful chapter... and given the upcoming makeover... I wonder if Spike will be showing up...

I think it is great, and I can't wait for them to show those bitches who's hot

I loved the new chapter. William is learning very quickly *gg* And I love how possesiv Buffy gets - leading to the wish to defend William :)

Loved the chapter. I'm glad that they have sweet little moments like that. And I don't think that this Buffy is anything like Faith. As you said Faith would not care about him at all. I just think that Buffy had a similar Angel/Angelus experience as to the show. She just reacted to it differently. Instead of pulling into herself, she changed the way that she appeared to others. This is a wonderful story. Can't wait for more.

WHOOOOOOOOOO love love love this story. Can't wait to see a made over William. Glad to see that Buffy would have him anyway he decides to be. MORE MORE MORE

I just started reading this story and I'm enjoying it so far. The smut is great and this oral chapter actually made me laugh at how blunt Buffy came out with the whole going down thing...pretty straight to the point...I like that. She is pretty aggressive in this chapter which I can see why some people would compare her to Faith but we all know Faith, like you said, would not give a shit so that difference alone kills that comparison. However, I would say more like Dru without the crazy because she is transforming him. What is concerning me now is that with all the new changes will William dump her after he sees all the new p***Y coming his way or will you keep it pretty much between them and possibly have them fall in love. Look forward to another update

I love Buffy being a sexually aggressive gal, and plus the way she still cares for Spike is a totall bonus. It's a sexual revelation for Spike and an emotional revelation for Buffy. It's almost as if nobody has cared for her before like William does. There are a few similarties to Faith, namely the sensuality, but she's not broken like Faith. I'm looking forward to seeing their relationship grow even stronger and to torture Cecile!

another fabulously yummy chapter addie. can't wait to see the reaction everyone has to the "new" william.

Excellent chapter! So Spike is gonna come out of shy William next chap? Can't wait!

She's gonna make him pretty. . .LOL. . can't wait to see that !!!!!

I like the tone of this story. And I understand the use of the language. Granted, fuck and horny aren't part of Buffy's normal vocab on BTVS, but that was also written for public TV. ... PLUS this isn't the Buffy who moved to Sunnydale and was befriended immediately by a her core friends. This Buffy was sent away by her parents as punishment, so to me this all makes sense. Plus, Buffy as a virgin on BTVS kinda suprised me having seen the movie. The way I see this fic, both William and Buffy have their handicaps, Buffy's will probably be emotional... expressing herself in a capacity other than physical and William's handicap is social having been too emotional and vulnerable. I really like the direction of this and despite the very *hot* sex scenes (which I definitely enjoy), this is so much more than a pwp. Sorry if I haven't reviewed yet. More soon please.

Nah, Buffy never even made me think of Faith. I think you've done a great job keeping her "Buffy" with also making her more aggressive. Kudos!