Don’t get me wrong, I love sex and fucking as much as the next girl and yes I am reading this because it was rated nc-17. But at this stage even I am rather worn out from the all-day every day sex-a-thons. No matter how virile a 17 year old boy is no boy can get it up that much and even if he could the soreness in both he and Buffy from all that would make it impossible.

And I gotta say again as much as I love fucking and sexing what I think is missing in this story is the TALKING. As neither really do much of that with each other. It’s all fucking, fucking and more fucking but without much talking going on like a real relationship. They don’t go out on dates anywhere ever, they don’t just sit back and talk. They say they’re both in love with the other after only a week together and that week has been made up of nothing but fucking...that’s not really love. That’s lust which is all cool and all but it’s not the same as love. Their minds are too fogged up with the sex for it to be love since they don’t ever just talk.

Damn! You are evil! Well I guess I'll just have to read the next chapter. And Cecily, that bitch. "Here's to hoping Cecily's been mauled by rabid bunnies."--I'm crossing my fingers for the walk back to whereever she's going! Great (evil) chapter.

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Cant wait to see what cecily's dredged up.

It, and the possible reactions of both William and Buffy are racing through my brain as i type.


So to this, i say HURRY!!!!
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Mmmmmm revenge is so sweet,hot and erotic. LOVED IT. Oh what is that evil bitch Cecily up to? I am sure William will show Buffy what that bitch did and then Buffy can kick her ass from her to next century. hehehe

okay pouting here! Make sure you update soon- soooo loving this!!

There had to be some drama, it's what makes your stories sing. You're detailing William's attachment to Buffy well, and the fact that Buffy silently shares his feelings is detailed and emotionally engaging.

Oh, i wanna know i wanna know!!!
Please update as SOON as you can, please don't make me wait long... it's torture

Ok yes evil but you just want us to ask for more. Please!!!!!

*Throws shoe at you* NO! You can leave it! Update soon please!

1. i remember you said this story would not have a lot of angst,.

2. william alraady knows about angel.

3 william already knows thet buffy had mutiple sexual partners.

4. william already knows that buffy was sent to england because she got into trouble--dame those smoking mice.

so....what's in the envelope can't be that bad? Please update soon this will drive me insane until you update and put me out of my misery.

NO!! I need to know whats in the packet! Update soon please!

hey not there, thats not fair. more please and i swear you won't have to duck. can't wait to see what is in that file. i hope it's nothing they can't talk out.

I love William in this story, but he's kind of naive isn't he. People don't send their kids across the globe because of bad grades. Can't wait to find out what she did and can't wait to find out his reaction.