Date: 01/26/2006 - 05:10 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
It is ccaptivating, engaging and just . . .you actually feel for both of them -- and they're so confused and scared and I just hope they don't end up like Romeo and Juliet
Date: 11/18/2005 - 03:55 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Well, it is a wonderful story... and I'm almost caught up with the most current post! Go me... Anyway, poor William, I just want to hug them, and sit them in a room, possibly with nerf bats... and just make them talk this all out. I guess emotion really does cloud the mind, especially when it comes to love... Fabulous chapter.
Date: 11/14/2005 - 01:58 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
I try not to mess up my review this time. YOU GO ADDIE! :D
WOW! I CRIED! Awwww that's really sad. Oh the big misunderstanding is killing me but it's good at the same time. I'm really happy with how you're writing this story. How you haven't rushed anything at all. The amount of angst is perfect, Addie and I can feel how real everything is. Thank you for writing such a beautiful, deep and realistic story. I can't wait for the next chapter.
And yay for you, for not listening to those impatient, anti-angst readers... You should always follow your heart, and write this for YOU. :D Thank YOU for even sharing your beautiful mind with us!
:hugs:
Date: 11/13/2005 - 10:50 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Great chapter despite the misunderstandings! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 11/13/2005 - 10:28 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Another great chapter.
Date: 11/13/2005 - 10:22 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
and I cry I cry I cry... it's all your fault !! soon ?
Date: 11/13/2005 - 07:47 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
AAAHhhhhh!!! The angst! The beautiful, painful angst!
Tell Buffy how stupid she's being! Dry William's tears! Wahhhhh!
Dark Eyed Seer
Date: 11/13/2005 - 07:22 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Just got caught up reading the new chapters. I love this fic. You are doing such an awesome job with it. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 11/13/2005 - 02:44 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
ehehe you are just evil ah? ajajaja great fic
never got tired of saying it
i even could tell in a diferent way
Me encanta tu historia
de verdad lo mejor de lo mejor
sigue asi porque con cada momento de amargura uhuh sufro auaujaja
bueno eso seria
camila, chile
;)
Date: 11/13/2005 - 01:08 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Another great chapter. Love how you did the turn around with William and Cicely. She so deserved it, but what is she up to now I wonder.
I fill the young lovers pain. Make it stop, please.
lilpuff
Date: 11/13/2005 - 10:49 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Hoping the angst will soon come to an end. I'm just praying those poor kids won't have to wait for years or have other partners in the meantime, shudder. Although I am not as fond of the story now as before, I'm still hooked and I can't wait for your next update.
Date: 11/13/2005 - 10:34 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
So Spike will tell Buffy that he loves her .. well he didn't notice that Buffy witnessed a bit. Oh I see - we read now William's POV. Yeah as I thought - that what Buffy didn't see was the urgent part: William rejecting Celily, William defending Buffy and threatening Cecily. Too bad that Buffy didn't stay and witnessed it - but I would have run too. Oh my.. that's so sad - poor ones. I hope William can talk to Buffy and she will listen. He can explain everything. It's so bittersweet at the moment. *sigh* Bittersweet but good! Thank you for writing!
Date: 11/13/2005 - 09:46 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
I just want to reiterate that I really love this story! I can't help but want more!
Date: 11/13/2005 - 09:42 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Why oh why did I read it before going to bed! Now I will have to go to sleep with a broken heart. That was so sad. :-( Sadder than any of the chapters before, and that's saying a lot! Nothing hopeful about this chapter. This story has me hooked as ever and I still really love. I just hope some goodness comes soon, because my heart can't take much more!
Date: 11/13/2005 - 09:22 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
more more more!!! i have followed this fic since day one - and have eagerly awaited each update - cant wait for more! hope our fav couple get bk together xxxxxx :)
Date: 11/13/2005 - 09:09 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Thank YOU for the entertainment. I knew you'd have to get all angsty cause you know - plot sneaks in and then you have to stop the hot sex for a while, oh well. Can't wait to see how William works it all out so he and Buffy can be together again - love what he said to Cecily. Looking forward to the next installment.
Date: 11/13/2005 - 09:02 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
I'm glad you had so many reviews, you deserve it. Your story is great and I hope you'll update soon.
Thanks
Date: 11/13/2005 - 08:03 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
still loving the story and cant wait for the two of them to get back together....
Date: 11/13/2005 - 07:12 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Noooooo! William can't give up! ARGH! I hope he finds a way to win her back soon. : )
Date: 11/13/2005 - 06:49 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
I really hope the pair of them can work it out....It's so sad that they have got things so mixed up and beleieve that they don't love each other.
Date: 11/13/2005 - 06:31 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Well great chapter, things sure seems to get messy now. How will they ever get out of this? I'll just stay tuned for more chapters and find out I guess :)
Date: 11/13/2005 - 05:53 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
So we've moved from the maybe to the definite then? Lovely chapter, but very sad. I'm trusting you to eventually make it better, okay?
Date: 11/13/2005 - 05:41 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
And now Willow is going to keep Buffy strong to keep her from slipping back into William's arms? Okay, the miscommunications and half truths are becoming maddening! I'm sure you have a delightful reconciliation in store for us, and I really do like all the high school door slamming and misunderstandings, but couldn't there be some positive, too?
Date: 11/13/2005 - 05:38 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
how could you do that. i need more, im dying here. love the story and need spike and buffy to get back together. love the story soo much its the best.please update soo thanx.
Date: 11/13/2005 - 05:24 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
okay, i'm glad the story is doing so well, but when are things going to get better with them? i was hoping that angst wouldn't really be involved much in this because you didn't even put it as one of the genres, but there was already more in it than i care to read. william should keep trying to talk to her and she should stop being so damn stubborn for once and listen to him. she should have stuck around longer to hear what he said to cecily. i hope that stupid bitch won't cause anymore problems. i'm just sick of all the angst in a lot of the stories i read and i really need something happier right now. i mean if i wanted angst, i would just look at the dvds. i hope it won't take too much longer to get better because i really don't want to have to stop reading this.
Author's Response: If you can't deal with what I've written, then by all means, stop reading. Many people are fine with it, and honestly, when it comes down to it, it's my story. I'm writing to please myself, and personally, I think a well developed story needs some conflict. You can either have patience or stop reading, it's your choice, but please, don't tell me what to write in my own story.