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Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/17/2005 - 11:23 pm Title: Chapter Seven

I hate the Immortal! Dawn has to be under a spell, for she would never think about Spike like that now.

Loved Spike and Buffy's dreams. Good to see Willow choosing the right path. Lorne's friend is charming. Love that Fred is reasserting herself in Illyria.

Author's Response: Thank you....it's been fun writing this one as well as hard........and some what sad........

Reviewer: Mole Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/17/2005 - 12:31 pm Title: Chapter Six

Spike and the baby, just too cute to be true! Update soon!

Author's Response: Spike and baby has been fun to write....slong with him an Conner

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2005 - 11:31 pm Title: Chapter Six

Xander's dream is seriously beyond freaky. I'm sure that's not really Anya, as she had finally accepted her humanity. Still, he must play some important part if whomever is trying to keep him from the right side of the fight.
I hope Oz will be running into Spike's group once they hit LV.

Author's Response: Oh it's Anya......as was she really recuiting him....or giving him something else to think about......for is her advice to him something that would help good or evil....hmmmmm.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2005 - 11:29 pm Title: Chapter Four

Listen to the inner voice, Buffy. It will save your life. We have intuition for a reason.

Author's Response: yes very good advice......

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2005 - 11:27 pm Title: Chapter Six

Seems the dreams are trying to say that the whole gang needs to band togehter for the good of the world again. Love seeing Spike's nurturing side. He'll be a great dad. I can't wait for Buffy to see him like this.

Author's Response: yes he dreams are being helpful, as long as the one that dreams listens, and looks between the lines......

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2005 - 11:24 pm Title: Chapter Four

Thank goodness Willow knows something's up with The Immortal. Though I think Buffy would hear her out of her feeling, too, since she's not fully into him, either, thanks to her love for Spike.

Author's Response: Love is a powerful thing....it can make you or break you......pick you up or knock you down......

Reviewer: SpaceLord Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2005 - 08:45 pm Title: Chapter Six

Great chapter, love all the characters you brought into the story.

Can't wait to read more

Author's Response: I am to please the best I can, and thank you for the review

Reviewer: SpaceLord Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/15/2005 - 05:13 pm Title: Chapter Five

Nice chapter, the story is coming along nicely. I'm thinking this will be a long story and that is just great IMO.

Author's Response: yes, it will be a tad long......but I dont' think it will be as long as LMFM....that one has grown larger then I had intended.........

Reviewer: SpaceLord Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/15/2005 - 10:20 am Title: Chapter Four

Great story so far, love all the characters makes the story so much fuller and richer.

Author's Response: Thank you....it's good to hear that........

Reviewer: Mole Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/14/2005 - 06:08 pm Title: Chapter Four

Hi! I checked chap 1 again; my computer must have played me, I could only read the part about Lorne and Connor. So, I was really wandereing why you would skip that part with Spike and Illyria. Now, that the whole chapter has appeared again, I'm really looking forward to the upcoming chapters!!!

Author's Response: cool, cause I was worried there for a minute....LOL

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/13/2005 - 03:51 pm Title: Chapter Two

Stupid newbie Slayer. It never looked like Angelus had returned, and there's no way she could have infiltrated into the right places to find out the real deals going on. So glad Buffy isn't jumping to the evil conclusion like Giles and Xander.

Of course the Immortal is using Buffy. Too bad he has that thrall, or whatever, that makes everybody love him. Spike's gotta figure out that Buffy is under a spell with that one. He KNOWS the Immortal is no good.

Author's Response: Nothing to support Angelus had come, but with the mistrust the others had concerning why Angel went into business wiith the enemy would be enough to put doubt and make them wonder if he truly did have a evil motive for joining the firm. Lose you soul once oops, lose it twice, oh my, lose it thrice, walking on thin ice......so leaves those to wonder if you could lose it again......the Immortal.....he is such a bad man.....and he's only started.....LOL

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/13/2005 - 03:29 pm Title: Chapter Three

The scroll, as in the Shanshu Prophecy scroll?

How dare Andrew make Spike think Buffy knows and doesn't care! That little bastard. I don't know how he could think that Spike was involved with something evil, either. Hello! The guy went through near death to earn his soul! He wouldn't do that, and certainly not with Angel, who he didn't get along with.

Like the foursome team here, though. It's a good group.

Author's Response: Oh, there will be answers as the story progresses......is Andrew acting on his own or is someone else and he is at a crossroads himself and just doesn't know it yet. hmmmmm.

Reviewer: Mole Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/13/2005 - 02:37 pm Title: Chapter Three

Glad to see some movement here, 'though it's not what I expected . I like the re-write so far though I'm missing the part where Illyria gave Spike her blood as it was in the first version.. I wasn't completely sure about Illyria's intentions toward Spike then, but now, I think there is a gap. If I hadn't read the first version.... I don't know, but there seems to be something missing.

Author's Response: Spike still feed from Illyria, it's in chapter one....LOL I even had to go back and read it to make sure it was still there.......and Thanks for staying with me on this one

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/13/2005 - 01:12 pm Title: Chapter Three

I can't tell you that there is much difference to the first version but I love it so far. Thanks for updating again.

Author's Response: Hey Cordy, I knew I could depend on you....The first chapter is unchanged plot content. There is new things added and other things moved to more appropriate times.

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/12/2005 - 04:36 pm Title: Chapter Two

Well I still think it wasn't Andrew's decision not to tell Buffy about the visit or Spike being alive. But it's too late for her now - at last for the moment. And the Immortal has Dawn under his charm.. and Buffy too. Till next time!

Author's Response: Nope more then one person didn't want Andrew telling Buffy.....(cough) when has he ever been able to really keep a secret....LOL.....and the Immorta is a bad bad thing......

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/12/2005 - 04:25 pm Title: Chapter One

Mmm-hmmm therefore. I thought HUH? I had more then two chapters but then I read your A/N. Will start reading again!

Author's Response: Welcome and thanks for taking the time to reread the story......I promise I think it's improved and going to be much better......or I could be wrong.

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