Date: 12/13/2005 - 04:04 am Title: Chapter One
loved it. great start.
Date: 12/09/2005 - 03:13 am Title: Chapter One
Very good start. Keep it up.
Date: 12/09/2005 - 12:32 am Title: Chapter One
good so far
Date: 12/08/2005 - 10:12 pm Title: Chapter One
Oh I like this Buffy..Ms. in charge girl.. No flames from me sweetie.. So far I love the story..keep going and update often! :-)
Date: 12/08/2005 - 07:24 pm Title: Chapter One
the beginning is quite captivating... hope to read more soon!
Date: 12/08/2005 - 06:19 pm Title: Chapter One
I like it so far. I can't wait to read more.
Date: 12/08/2005 - 05:58 pm Title: Chapter One
this was very good for a first fic.. very good...period... though one small thing, it's Xander with an X not Zander... that's all ;) interesting story!! hope we hear from you again...thanx!
Date: 12/08/2005 - 05:37 pm Title: Chapter One
I like the idea of Buffy as a crime scene investigator... hehe... my favourite show CSI and favourite couple Buffy and Spike together....mmm... heady cocktail.
Anyway, I know this is your first fic (as you've mentioned) and you did well, but I just have to say that your style of writing is a bit formal... I don't know how to explain it. Just a bit clipped here and there. That, and Buffy gets referred to as "sir"?
But other than that, I wanna see how this turns out, so keep them chappies coming! ;)
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm really not that conservative, but she's an officer and believe it or not they do talk like that. I'm an officer and my dad was a CSI for 23 years, so the police jargon might be a little strong at first, but Buffy will lighten up once she and Spike start to get to know each other.
Thanks for the review, I really appreciate it!