Reviews For Stranger in Death
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Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/13/2005 - 04:04 am Title: Chapter One

loved it. great start.

Reviewer: jt Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/09/2005 - 03:13 am Title: Chapter One

Very good start. Keep it up.

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/09/2005 - 12:32 am Title: Chapter One

good so far

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/08/2005 - 10:12 pm Title: Chapter One

Oh I like this Buffy..Ms. in charge girl.. No flames from me sweetie.. So far I love the story..keep going and update often! :-)

Reviewer: klylu Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/08/2005 - 07:24 pm Title: Chapter One

the beginning is quite captivating... hope to read more soon!

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/08/2005 - 06:19 pm Title: Chapter One

I like it so far. I can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: Mariana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/08/2005 - 05:58 pm Title: Chapter One

this was very good for a first fic.. very good...period... though one small thing, it's Xander with an X not Zander... that's all ;) interesting story!! hope we hear from you again...thanx!

Reviewer: luxferi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/08/2005 - 05:37 pm Title: Chapter One

I like the idea of Buffy as a crime scene investigator... hehe... my favourite show CSI and favourite couple Buffy and Spike together....mmm... heady cocktail.

Anyway, I know this is your first fic (as you've mentioned) and you did well, but I just have to say that your style of writing is a bit formal... I don't know how to explain it. Just a bit clipped here and there. That, and Buffy gets referred to as "sir"?

But other than that, I wanna see how this turns out, so keep them chappies coming! ;)

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm really not that conservative, but she's an officer and believe it or not they do talk like that. I'm an officer and my dad was a CSI for 23 years, so the police jargon might be a little strong at first, but Buffy will lighten up once she and Spike start to get to know each other. Thanks for the review, I really appreciate it!

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