Date: 10/13/2007 - 02:59 pm Title: Part 2. A Helping Hand
Oh wow. I like this premise a lot. Spike with amnesia thinking he’s William. It’ll be comical when he finds out ‘what’ he is and just how he ‘acts’ these days. Not to mention I can hardly wait to see if Buffy falls for ‘William’. I mean, who wouldn’t? A Victorian gentleman complete with the shy thing? YUM! Xander was funny: “Failing to see the problem here.” And Buffy with the poop in their stockings, frickin hilarious. Wow, that was somewhat heart breaking to read William’s reaction to Buffy telling him about Spike. I think him holding her hand was rather touching and sweet, too. Seems William’s power of perception as to what feelings he has for Buffy is at least clear, giggles. Ok, so I’m totally swooning over his compliment to her beauty and such a shocking tender kiss for her to recieve. Yup, seems I’m right... Buffy is going to have a hell of a time NOT falling for him. You’re writing is lovely darling. Very easy to read and the flow is smooth as silk.
Date: 12/27/2005 - 03:24 pm Title: Part 2. A Helping Hand
Nice chapter! The Scoobies can be so mean at times,huh. Good characterization of them as well as Joyce and Dawn.
Author's Response: thank you!
Date: 12/25/2005 - 05:10 pm Title: Part 2. A Helping Hand
I'm glad that at last Willow (and Tara) trying to help Buffy. This was sweet :)
Author's Response: thank you!
Date: 12/20/2005 - 10:17 am Title: Part 2. A Helping Hand
I'm lovin' it! That little peck on the cheek was very sweet. can't wait for more please.
Author's Response: Yes, William is just the sweetest, ne?
Date: 12/18/2005 - 12:09 am Title: Part 2. A Helping Hand
i really like this chapter... buffy and spike being confused about their feeling, and the fact that buffy is, for once, really concerned about spike...
Author's Response: Well how can you not be sweet to such an adorable guy? hehe
Date: 12/17/2005 - 10:54 pm Title: Part 2. A Helping Hand
Of course Xander and Giles were not willing to help but I just love Joyce. I hope that while Spike and Buffy go through this time that they truely become closer. Great chapter.
Author's Response: Xander and Giles are such wankers...