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Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2006 - 06:59 am Title: Chapter 5 – Killer moves

Well, taking Ben out makes sense... wonder what that really changes. Love Spike reacting to Bufffy. Really, what can one say to their supposed mortal enemy when the future daugter of said pair appears and lets him in on the secret. Perfect reaction. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Tasha Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/13/2006 - 07:35 pm Title: Chapter 5 – Killer moves

Good update. Look forward to more. Spike pretty much wigged out on Buffy there.

Reviewer: seraiza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/13/2006 - 04:57 pm Title: Chapter 5 – Killer moves

well a least the ben/glory problem is taken care of...... love the update and waiting for more!

Author's Response: Yup, that's one thing that I really needed to get rid of =P Thanks!

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/13/2006 - 04:41 pm Title: Chapter 5 – Killer moves

Great chapter. I'm a bit disturbed by the ending, but I think I got what you were trying to say with that.

Author's Response: Thank, I appreciate that. I know the end is not that fun, but I just neede to get it out of the way

Reviewer: jenny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/13/2006 - 05:09 am Title: Chapter 5 – Killer moves

please update soon! i can't wait until buffy finds out just what spike was rambling about! i am loving your story!!

Reviewer: letitia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/13/2006 - 04:43 am Title: Chapter 5 – Killer moves

Now what is she going to do now that Spike has kindof let the cat out of the bag. I just hope that she can fix this... Great chapter.

Reviewer: sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/13/2006 - 03:21 am Title: Chapter 5 – Killer moves

okay, i'm not sure what i think about this. it's a little too weird for me and i have a feeling this will be my last chapter. i didn't like that she killed ben. she's supposed to be buffy's daughter after all and i don't like that you made her a killer, i'm sure buffy wouldn't be proud of that either. even if it was glory, it still wasn't right.

Author's Response: I get that, I do. But this girl had been trough hell and back. You have to understand that she is here to stop that from happening. She doesn't want to kill Ben, but she feels she has too. She had become bitter from all the things that happened in her life, so that's why she isn't a really sweet innocent girl. Her mission is to change that, so she will be =P But I'm sorry you feel that way

Reviewer: frank Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/13/2006 - 02:22 am Title: Chapter 5 – Killer moves

You really need to find a beta. This many blinding errors are very distracting and make it hard for me to keep reading. I don't know what bloodshedbaby helped you with here, but he/she needs to do more

Author's Response: She did not do this chapter yet, but I'm working on it right now.

Reviewer: Caro Mio Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/13/2006 - 01:50 am Title: Chapter 5 – Killer moves

Good chapter for content, but you might want to have a beta go over it first. You have a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes.

Author's Response: I've found a Beta, and I'm working on it right now!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/12/2006 - 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 5 – Killer moves

Loved it! Looking forward for more!

Reviewer: neo_trinityknot Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/12/2006 - 08:08 pm Title: Chapter 5 – Killer moves

Looking forward to more soon!

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