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Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/17/2010 - 02:34 am Title: Chapter 4: 'Dreams In Paradise; Nightmares In Hell'

i knew this was going to happen :( this is just awful. i feel so poorly for william and his family but obviously mostly for william and all this pain :(

Reviewer: Brittany Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2006 - 12:08 am Title: Chapter 4: 'Dreams In Paradise; Nightmares In Hell'

i absolutly LOVE this story and i cant waite for the next chapter!!!!! and you are good at writting angst, i was balling my eyes out when i read this chapter!!!

Author's Response: Thank you! I am going to try and write the complete next chapter this weekend and post it by Monday. It's going to be tough because it's a little tricky (the plot line) and I want to keep it believable. I will give you a hint/spoiler: Spuffy will prevail (of course) and yes, it will end up in Sunnydale, CA 2001/2002. That's a little hint to the plot line for the final chapter. Keep your fingers crossed that I can pull this off! spuf

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/16/2006 - 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 4: 'Dreams In Paradise; Nightmares In Hell'

*sniff* That was so much fun to read at the begin; but then indeed the angst did begin. The baby girl died and I fear Buffy will too. Because the three strange persons? The later know 'fanged four' I assume. Now I know where this story is heading. It does a circle before it closes again. *reading on* Yeah, she died. So sad.. So I would call it good, your angst.

Author's Response: Yes, life was no bed of roses back then (no matter how heavenly some want to remember it as) And, yes, the trio in the alley was Angelus, Darla and Drusilla. I threw Dalton in there because no ever really explained him. Buffy/Lizzy died and (spoiler) it 'is' Buffy none other. In the next chapter things will be revealed and things explained, hopefully. Also, there will be no memory loss on either Buffy or Spike's part in chapter 5 so don't worry, it's definitely Spuffy! Thanks, Spuf

Reviewer: BluEyeDevil Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/16/2006 - 11:07 am Title: Chapter 4: 'Dreams In Paradise; Nightmares In Hell'

i'm really getting into this story. Its really well written and i can't 'put it down'. Please update!!

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm trying to update soon. spuf

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/16/2006 - 10:11 am Title: Chapter 4: 'Dreams In Paradise; Nightmares In Hell'

Wow! Heavy chapter that was really tough to read. But I think you did a fine job with the drama and heartache. Can't wait read more.

Author's Response: Thank you. I promise the angst will continue, briefly, in the next and final chapter. However, some things will be revealed. spuf

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/16/2006 - 03:36 am Title: Chapter 4: 'Dreams In Paradise; Nightmares In Hell'

this chapter really threw me off...did buffy die or the baby ??? if it was buffy exactly what happened? will there be any more spuffy at all in this story??

Author's Response: Thank you for reading. Okay, here's a spoiler so if you want to be surprised, dont read further: Yes, it was Buffy and technically, yes she and the baby died. Remember, she wanted to the name a girl, Dawn? That's a hint to the next chapter. And, yes, in Chapter 5 (the last chapter) it will be Spuffy! Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/16/2006 - 03:25 am Title: Chapter 4: 'Dreams In Paradise; Nightmares In Hell'

Oh, this was such a sad chapter. I'm so sorry that Elizabeth and her baby died. Poor William. And I'm thoroughly intrigued over where you're going with this. You wrote wonderful angst, sweetie and I can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thank you. I am going to give a hint here: So...spoiler alert: The next chapter will take place in the very beginning of season 6 from the show. Remember how Buffy kept going on about being in Heaven and feeling loved and protected? Well, I never felt that she was necessarily in Heaven per say; just perhaps her own private one! Thanks spuf

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/16/2006 - 02:54 am Title: Chapter 4: 'Dreams In Paradise; Nightmares In Hell'

That was wow...Intense. Some shades of Bram Stokers Dracula in there (the movie version anyway lol) with the defying of God and the death of his beloved. My heart just broke for him!!! I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thanks. I hope I got the angst down. It was very hard for me. The next chapter will reveal the twist I promised and the truth about Spike and Buffy's connection. The one Giles kept ranting about in season 7! Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: Kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/16/2006 - 01:31 am Title: Chapter 4: 'Dreams In Paradise; Nightmares In Hell'

I like how this one is going, or at least how I think its going. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you. I think you probably have the next chapter pretty well figured out. Here's a hint: I have never felt that anyone on earth could pull Buffy out of 'real' Heaven. I understood how Buffy may have thought she was in Heaven; she was loved; she was done. There you have it. In the next chapter, I hope to, well, let's just say I hope to right some wrongs that I feel were made on BTVS in season 5 & 6. spuf

Reviewer: Jess Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/16/2006 - 01:05 am Title: Chapter 4: 'Dreams In Paradise; Nightmares In Hell'

I really do like this story and I hate to be fussy, but you change Buffy and William's titles 3 times by the first 2 chapters. William is an Earl and then a Baron and then a Lord and Buffy is a Duchess but her mother is only a Lady and her dad is then a Lord. Buffy's parents are either Lord and Lady or Duke and Duchess and Buffy would always be Lady until her dad died. Sorry to sound picky and I know English titles are confusing, I just wanted to point it out! Apart from this, this story is really good and I don't want you to think that what I just said was a criticism, it was just something that was annoying me! Sorry for the long post!

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing, no offense taken at all. I was under the mistaken impression that that Lord and Lady covered a multitude of titles. Mea Culpa and I apologize. I'm afraid I should have studied and investigated my sources a bit more. I understand how things like this can annoy readers (especially knowledgeble ones) and I really do appreicate you pointing it out. Yes, I'm afraid English titles are a bit out of my league, but next time, I will try harder to get them right. Thanks again, spuf

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