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Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/01/2012 - 03:33 pm Title: Vacation

Pretty cute. Some problems. Many grammar & other mechanical errors. Started really well, and sort of fell apart in the middle. Feelings/admissions came a bit too quickly. The logistics of the wedding day were a jumble, hard to follow, and then it would have taken Buffy an hour or so at the airport, to puchase the ticket, go through security (did she have her passport in her bridesmaid's dress?), then board the plane. The flight, if direct to the US west coast (unlikely) would have taken more than 10 hours (not 2). The resolution was a little clunky, too. Moved too quickly, had characters that were not well utilized (Colin, for example), and should have included Spike's family, since they featured at the beginning of their relationship, and they were so involved with Buffy and her feelings.

I did enjoy reading this, but mostly the good beginning!

Reviewer: spuffy28 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/03/2011 - 11:24 pm Title: Vacation

love it. but come on, at least one more chapter.
plleeeaaasssse!

Reviewer: spuffy chick Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/07/2008 - 10:56 pm Title: Vacation

sweeeeet!!! :)

Reviewer: kw Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/02/2008 - 12:37 am Title: Vacation

cute story like an old Irish song of misunderstanding without the sad ending. She really put him through the ringer.

Reviewer: jeanieofoz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/16/2008 - 03:44 pm Title: Vacation

thank you for finishing it ! i have to admit that i had kind of given up hope that it ever would be. but am very happy that it now is .
and a squeesome ending it was too :D

Reviewer: sta Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2008 - 01:23 pm Title: Vacation

I really enjoyed the story and loved their dialogue and relationship. He was a prince. I was a bit confused by their flights home. It should have taken a day to get back from London and it seeemed to imply that it was an hour or so. I also would have loved to read more about thier reunion, though I was glad you didn't kill off Joyce.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/16/2008 - 10:56 pm Title: Vacation

Really enjoyed this fic!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/16/2008 - 06:28 pm Title: Vacation

Wow, I didn't think to see more of this story. Glad to see I was wrong.
Good to have friends like Anya :)
Thanks for letting us see how it ends; a happy end is even better :)

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/16/2008 - 01:57 pm Title: Vacation

So glad you decided to finish this , it's one of my favorites, and so good , thanks for writing it.

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/16/2008 - 01:34 pm Title: Vacation

Started this today and I couldn't stop reading - loved it.

Reviewer: Aly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/16/2008 - 12:58 pm Title: Vacation

Hey, I am so happy you finally posted the last chapter ;) I just love it and it's so sweet that Anya invited them both and Buffy finally got a grip.

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