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Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2006 - 07:51 pm Title: 3 - Attack of the Zombies

Shopping.. Buffy must be hungry by now because she didn't eat any pizza. It really looks like these two (Buffy and Spike) are always fighting. I wonder why Buffy doesn't like Spike. We'll see, huh?

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2006 - 04:52 am Title: 3 - Attack of the Zombies

good update

Reviewer: sandra Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2006 - 07:42 am Title: 3 - Attack of the Zombies

more, more, more Please!!!!!

Reviewer: Isabe Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/16/2006 - 04:48 am Title: 3 - Attack of the Zombies

I'm glad Spike is getting along with Xander. They're cute together playing zombies lol. To be honest with you, I usually avoid high school AU fics, but this one is fun. Keep writing and I'll keep reviewing ;)

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2006 - 02:55 am Title: 3 - Attack of the Zombies

Great fic! Please update soon!

Reviewer: letitia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2006 - 09:41 pm Title: 3 - Attack of the Zombies

wonder what will happen next???

Reviewer: luxferi Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2006 - 06:42 am Title: 3 - Attack of the Zombies

OK, um... I think I got a couple of things to say. 1) I love your fic, yeah the high school thing is done before but I still like reading any spuffy fic and it's well done, and 2) there's an inconsistency about Riley. In the first chapter Buffy already told Willow and Xander that she was going to Homecoming with Riley, but in this chapter Willow acted like she didn't know. Plus she said this:

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“You said you weren’t going with him, though.”

“When did I say that?”

“Yesterday.”

“Oh yeah.”
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which confuses me, because I couldn't find it on any other chapter.

Um... just my two cents worth. But other than that, I like the fic! Please keep writing and hope you won't hate me so much for pointing the inconsistency out!


Author's Response: ack! thank you for pointing that out! i should probably get that fixed up, huh? thanks! and thanks for enjoying. i really hadn't noticed that mistake, which must mean i was lazy to have not caught it... i'll get that straightened out. sorry!

Reviewer: Smitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2006 - 05:55 am Title: 3 - Attack of the Zombies

LOLpoor Spike always gets such a hard time

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