Reviews For PULSE
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Reviewer: theladyofspike Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2005 - 12:00 am Title: Ataxia

Great chapter!! amazing I've gotta say ;) Please update soon!!! :)

Author's Response: Thanks lady...great to hear from you again...update on it's way...just been working on the nexy chapter

Reviewer: Jen Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2005 - 07:14 am Title: Ataxia

I absolutely adore this story. This chapter was so intense. I loved it - I hope the next chapter comes out soon - it's addictive!!

Author's Response: Thanks Jen as always, I'm working on the next chapter right now...well writing and deleting alot..LOL hope to get it out soon :) luv M.

Reviewer: Rocco Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2005 - 06:08 am Title: Ataxia

First off, I think your story is fantastic! The only thing that's bothering me is that every time Buffy brings up the "I'm just a fuck to you", Spike seems to always go on the attack. While this is of course understandable, you never have Spike either in his thoughts or words take the response further than turning it around on Buffy - he never takes any responsibility in the arguement. Then, you have Buffy get really guilty about how right Spike is, and never come up with a solution for her issues. After all, it takes two to argue, and by 'favoring' one character over another, the story becomes less real. Other than this, however, I'm loving your story. The amount of detail you put in your characters emotions come through load and clear. Hope another update comes soon!

Author's Response: Thanks for your comments Rocco...all fair and valid points...I favourite Buffy alot this chapter so that I could give alot more time (I hope) to Spike's character in the next chapter. As for a solution to her immediate problem...hmm a bit difficult for what I felt the charater to come up with in one chapter. I hope that I project many layers of fiction within the story of PULSE, too have solutions to such serious actions all in one chapter I think would be cheating the story. Yet I do hear what your saying, I do agree to some extent and I'm always willing to listen to what people have to say. I'm REALLY happy that your enjoying the fic and hope that you'll continue to read the fic... Luv Mercy :)

Reviewer: Cordykitten Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2005 - 11:04 pm Title: Ataxia

Wow - what a chapter. I'm glad Buffy didn't leave him there.. and came back to face the music. But what she did because she felt hurt came slowly to her. I just hope the won't get an nervous break down now (getting coma like). "shutting down". Great chapter- i was glad to see the updated. I hope they'll talk and build their relationship now.

Author's Response: Thanks Cordy...always great to hear from one of my fav reg..LOL no nervous breakdown...alot of soul searching but no mental instituations promise..Luv Merc

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2005 - 10:32 pm Title: Ataxia

i hope that maybe in the next chapter he will try to forgive her and give it another shot

Author's Response: Hey sweetie!! glad to see your still hanging on...hmmm ... food for thought...:) ;) Love Wendy

Reviewer: shippy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2005 - 05:45 pm Title: Ataxia

Another Spike the jerk fic, grrrrrrr! Not that Buffy was blameless but I understand where she's coming from. However I don't want to see them move on away from each other.

Author's Response: I promise shippy that this isn't 'another Spike's a jerk fic'..I promise this is about reaching the some darkest depths of our beings, pushing social norms (well sexual) and finding redemption for themslves together through....now that would be telling. I hope that you'll continue to read the fic...please email me if I deviate to much onto the darkside.. : ) Luv Mercy

Reviewer: Annette Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2005 - 05:16 pm Title: Ataxia

Go Spike! Don't let her in yet. She didn't want to communicate to you and then treated you horribly. She doesn't deserve forgiveness yet. Especially because you couldn't trust her in the future. Be strong.!

Author's Response: LOL Thank you Annette...I loved your comments. His going to need to strong...as they go deeper into the abyss.. Thanks again Luv mercy

Reviewer: Allison Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2005 - 04:02 pm Title: Ataxia

I feel horrible for both of them. Spike got what he deserved, yes, but still, that had to be horrible. And Buffy- I see where she was coming from, but the repercussions of it must be hard to face

Author's Response: Thanks Allison, I could only imagine the repercussions and both have alot to make up to each other. Thanks for the comments..hope that you'll stay on board for the journey... Luv Mercy

Reviewer: vamptasticA Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2005 - 03:57 pm Title: Ataxia

wow...that was....wow. Very very good. I loved how you managed to convey both of their anger and their guilt so well. Very poignant. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks vamptasticA! Always great to hear from you. I apprechaite your comments alot, especially since your one of the authors that got me all hot and bothered so much that I had to put my hand into the smutty realm...LOL Luv M.

Reviewer: Scarlet Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2005 - 02:50 pm Title: Ataxia

So great to see this updated. I missed the chapters before about what Buffy was up to. Pretty fucked up and to tell you the truth I don't see a way out for her even with her little fainting thing. She definitely goes in that "ex-psycho-girlfriend" category here (but then Spike always likes the psychos doesn't he?)

Author's Response: Thanks for the comments Scarlet, the fic has tangled it own little web...and I'm trying my darnest to sort it out. Hope you'll stay on board! Luv M.

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2005 - 02:16 pm Title: Ataxia

Just like a guy, he can't see how far he pushed her. Just like a girl she didn't know when to walk away. He can't see that he made her feel a like a whore which would equal to what she made him feel.......she tried to talk, and he returned it with sex.....when she tried to tell him she wanted to go out and do things together......I thnk she should find someone who knows how to give love and love and not make it all about sex. He needs to find someone that likes the sex and doen't care if they are told he loves them or not and will keep his bed warm and their mouths shut and just fuck......sorry, bad day, put I see where they might just for once TALK and not hump or hurt each other......GREAT chapter, I like a story that makes me feel so strongly about a character it pisses me off sometimes or makes me laugh to cry....and story had done about all of it........I watch for you update all the time.....

Author's Response: Thanks Kimba, I'm glad that you are enjoying the fic, it's been more difficult to write than I thought. LOL I have to agree with all your comments, yet...LOL but that would be telling. You'll just have to see how it pans out. I'm happy that you feel so strongly about the fic, it's made me cry, laugh and torn me apart when I've written it. Something dark and deep inside...

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