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Reviewer: aoife Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2006 - 06:28 am Title: Daddy dearest

great fic. buffy and spike were 14 and 15 when they had triplets, woah! or are theysomeone elses kids biologically?!

Author's Response: no they were young when they had them, i'll explain in later chapters. Thanx!

Reviewer: chrissnicole Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2006 - 05:32 am Title: Daddy dearest

WHO'S ON RHE PHONE I WONDER. LIKED IT KEEP GOING

Author's Response: you'll just to wait and see!!! Thank you for your review it means a lot to me!!

Reviewer: deva Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/14/2006 - 06:55 pm Title: Daddy dearest

I pretty much didn't bother to read any more after I saw Spike say, "Never wanted to hit someone so much in me life.". Spike isn't Irish, unless you made him one which isn't stated at all. So I don't know why he would suddenly say 'me' instead of 'my'.

There were a lot of punctuation and spelling mistakes so I advice you to get a beta to help you out with that. And for Christ sakes, some of us do actually care about our eyes! Put some damn spacing after everything paragraph. This gives the impression that the author doesn't really know what s/he is doing.

All in all, this still needs some cleenup.

Author's Response: Thank you

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/14/2006 - 06:23 pm Title: Daddy dearest

great update

Author's Response: Thank you!! I hope that you are enjoying this story!!

Reviewer: Spuffy6 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/14/2006 - 04:40 pm Title: Daddy dearest

sounds pretty good. How old are the triplets? First you said Anya was younger and Dawn was older, then that they were triplets? I'm just trying to figure out how old they are? Other then that I look forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: The triplets are 12 years old. Connor is the oldest, followed by Dawn then Anya. Thanks for the review, it really means a lot to me!!

Reviewer: seraiza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/14/2006 - 03:53 pm Title: Daddy dearest

triplets..... now thats a cute sight..... waiting for more!

Author's Response: I'll try to get more soon!! Thanks for the review it means a lot to me!!

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