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Reviewer: MarstersGirl13 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2006 - 09:58 pm Title: I Guess That Works

MORE PLEASE!

Reviewer: Bozakka Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2006 - 09:05 pm Title: I Never Knew

Wow! i love this story it has a nice plot and I'm looking foward to more :)
xxx,
Amanda

Reviewer: MarstersGirl13 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2006 - 07:32 pm Title: I Never Knew

i loved it! did i read this on fanfiction.net?? well update soon!

Author's Response: Probably it's posted there and I finally updated it there and decided I wanted to see what other people thought of it too.

Reviewer: Spike_rulez Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2006 - 07:01 pm Title: I Never Knew

Great start! But poor William...as long as it works out in the end ;)
But there's one thing that irritates me a little...the William in your story didn't sound like a geek when he spoke to Buffy. He didn't sound shy at all, just annoyed. But that's the only thing to criticise...kepp up the great work and most importantly update soooooon :D

Author's Response: Yeah I kinda noticed that too after I read over what I wrote but then after thinking about it, I figured that just because someone is classified as a geek because of the way they dress and look doesn't mean that their whole personallity is geekish. Thanks for pointing out things like that. I shall be updating real soon the next chapters almost finished. PB

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