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Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/07/2007 - 01:01 pm Title: Chp 14 Points of View

I've only just found this wonderful fic, so I thought I'd let you know how much I love it. Life is never simple for our favourite couple is it? I just love little Joyce and Billy, so many secrets, so much insecurity. So like their grandparents... all of them!
So... they're all going to be in the bubble... I see much drama and unintentional hilarity on the horizon! I wonder what the first Slayer wants with Joyce?
More soon please... I'm on the edge of my seat here!

Author's Response: thank you so much. Glad you’re enjoying the story.

Reviewer: u2fan2005 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/18/2007 - 11:11 am Title: Chp 14 Points of View

When is this family going to get any more better? I can understand that Shanny isn't so keen with Spike and Buffy not looking after the twins at all times. But i feel there needs to be a lot talkage between the three of them to get over the past. Maybe Shanny is more stressed than ever because she's seeing her own daughter become like her when she was little and she is turning out like her mother. Or maybe the twins are getting more attention than she ever got from her parents.

Author's Response: I think it is very difficult for an outsider to imagine exactly how difficult it would be if you were the "normal" child of a Slayer and a Vampire! Role models you can never reach because of the way you are. And Buffy and Spike who love Shanny dearly, still don’t understand her. They’ve all got a lot to learn.

Reviewer: kw Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/18/2007 - 02:47 am Title: Chp 14 Points of View

wow heated chapter

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2007 - 08:36 am Title: Chp 14 Points of View

Old old woman with paint on her face? That sounds as if Joyce saw the First Slayer. I'm not sure if that is a good thing or a bad thing yet.
That's the thing with hearing both sides, huh? Buffy thought Shanny was rejecting Spike but when I heard Shanny's thoughts it seems it was in order not to hurt him with his cross... That's the way misunderstandings are starting.
Secret is out now; I wonder how Shanny will take it. Angel being there doesn't do Buffy and Spike good. It gets Spike jealous and Angel complaining about how he and Buffy lives? Still wanting Buffy? Seems so.
Ah well; bringing them all in the bubble will solve the problem only temporarily. But if they are there they should have no other possibility and starting to talk together. Well maybe they think of something else.... (like fighting on). But how will they get out? That will make things worse I fear...

Author's Response: Yes, all being together will force them to work and understand each other more - well, that’s what I hope, but hey, I’m only telling the story, what do I know!?

Reviewer: Francine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2007 - 09:39 pm Title: Chp 14 Points of View

Uh oh! I guess having all four adults in the shield is safer than having two kids alone in it but still.. not good. I am glad to see this story updated.

Author's Response: thank you so much for reviewing. It will be intriguing to see how the six of them react to each other. This will be the first time Angel has had time with the twins!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2007 - 09:46 am Title: Chp 14 Points of View

The lack of communication between Shanny and her parents is postively heartbreaking. :-( Can't wait to find out who Joyce was looking at, and if she goes through with her plan. Great chapter!

Author's Response: Joyce and Spike - a generation apart, but still have the same effect on plans! It’s a very good idea she has but how will it work in reality? Thank you for reviewing.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2007 - 11:15 pm Title: Chp 14 Points of View

Oh, No... bad plan Joyce. They are too close for comfort now.

Waiting to see who the bad lady is ..

Enjoying. Love the kids.

And the Spike, Buffy, Shanny relationship is ... them trying to make her aware of their world and her trying to run away from it.

And when things get too bad with the twins.. dumping them on Spike and Buffy and expecting them to cure her problem.

. Poor Spike..

Author's Response: thank you so much for your comments. Yes, I feel it is all going to get very complicated, very soon. Especially if Billy starts reading Angel’s mind!

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