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Reviewer: charlotte Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/07/2007 - 04:42 pm Title: The Shot Heard Around the World

HEY please up date soon. i wondered if you'd considered introducing spikes parents. just a thought .
loved the fic

bye

Author's Response: Hello, hopefully I'll be up be updating with a new chapter soon. But I plan to introduce Spike's parents/family later in the story. Thanks for the suggestion though.

Reviewer: carolina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/20/2007 - 01:58 am Title: The Shot Heard Around the World

plz update SOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Author's Response: Wow. I'll be updating soon, hopefully. Sorry for the wait.

Reviewer: charzy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2007 - 04:44 pm Title: The Shot Heard Around the World

please update soon !!!!!!

Reviewer: sexiespikelover Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/19/2007 - 11:45 pm Title: The Shot Heard Around the World

Poor Buffy! She's not getting very settled in Spike's world huh? And to top it off, Eve? Poor Buffy! Keep up the Spuffy goodness!

Reviewer: Serenity Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/16/2007 - 03:17 am Title: The Shot Heard Around the World

GAH! Must read more, now! Really enjoyed this chapter. Can't wait to find out what Buffy says to Spike about Eve; not to mention the family dinner with her parents and Dawn. Why do I feel like the phrase "Dum Da Da Dum..." needs to be placed at the end of this installment?

Reviewer: letitia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/16/2007 - 01:54 am Title: The Shot Heard Around the World

Okay I finally got a chance to sit down and read. I absolutely loved the chapter. Buffy and Spike shared something intimate and it ws ended way too soon. And now she knows what was going on. I really do hope that she can handle this. And to now see why Kendra and Eve were giving her the evil eye. She had to know that Spike got around before she showed up... And I just love how Faith and Buffy talk to each other. I hope she realizes that she is really not alone.

Reviewer: Verda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/16/2007 - 12:57 am Title: The Shot Heard Around the World

Another update, thank you so much. To bad Spike gave Eve the same look he'd givin Buffy. That won't make her feel any better about him. Jealous maybe but that's a lot different then giving into his desires, knowing he looks the same way at another woman. This won't help Buffy convince her mother that she's there because she wants to be, earlier maybe, doubtful now.

I hope you find a beta soon. A great chapter, thanks.

Reviewer: pixiecorn Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/13/2007 - 10:26 am Title: The Shot Heard Around the World

ooo interesting.....i loved this chapter:) cant wait for the next update...hope more is to come soon

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/13/2007 - 04:56 am Title: The Shot Heard Around the World

Power packed chapter with war being declared and unknown rivals of the feminine kind revealed. Buffy feeling jealous after Spike all but put his stamp of ownership on her in front of the family only to find out that his regular sleep buddy is in the crowd giving her the death glare must have her off balance and feeling awkward. Faith really doesn't pull any punches when it comes to answering questions and at least she stood next to Buffy after Spike left her side during the meeting. Really looking forward to more chapters.

Reviewer: Dee81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/13/2007 - 12:16 am Title: The Shot Heard Around the World

Two chapters in one week...I feel spoiled ;)

I'm glad that you didn't have Buffy and Spike go all the way yet. It just leads up more to the sexual tension, and I like the fact that Buffy and Spike are emotionally becoming closer.

I'm looking forward to finding out the role that Eve will be playing, and how the gang will be handling the fact that the mafia war has just gotten a lot more dangerous. I'm worried about Spike, Faith, Xander, etc but that's mainly because you do such fabulous job at writing these characters in this type of story.

Great work. I can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Thanks so much. Yeah, I really plan to not rush them into the actual wild bunny act for awhile, I feel like letting that sexual tension cook for awhile until it boils.

Reviewer: Brittany Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/12/2007 - 11:45 pm Title: The Shot Heard Around the World

YOU ABSOLUTLY HAVE TO UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!! I ***NEED*** to know what happens!!!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/12/2007 - 11:22 pm Title: The Shot Heard Around the World

Things are starting to heat up! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/12/2007 - 11:20 pm Title: The Shot Heard Around the World

Porn lite if you ask me ;) So everything is speeding up. and uh-oh, Eve.

Reviewer: anon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/12/2007 - 08:41 pm Title: The Shot Heard Around the World

oh shoot. can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Shez Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/12/2007 - 02:58 pm Title: The Shot Heard Around the World

Wow great chapter, I loved the scene in the dance studio and Buffy's jealousy, look forward to another chapter of this fantastic story.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/12/2007 - 01:56 pm Title: The Shot Heard Around the World

Oh man...this is not good. It's not good at all. Buffy is not gonna be happy. I would not be happy if he looked at another girl like that after just spending that time with me. Poor Buffy.

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/12/2007 - 12:48 pm Title: The Shot Heard Around the World

OH can't wait for the next chapter, I know he really didn't do anything wrong , butwhat he did made me mad. I think he needs a little bit of the cold shoulder for this, and he won't even know why. Update soon please ,please , please.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/12/2007 - 09:00 am Title: The Shot Heard Around the World

Oh, confrontation.. and a little jealousy..

Enjoyed..

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/12/2007 - 08:50 am Title: The Shot Heard Around the World

Oh that was good, bring in a little loving and then a crisis and and ex bed buddy and Buffy gets upset, does she think he is still doing that.

More please.

Reviewer: jamies_lady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/12/2007 - 07:27 am Title: The Shot Heard Around the World

oh dear, spike is going one step forward and three back, and what is Joyce going to say? she's not stupid!!
looking forward to more and so glad you are updating this one

Reviewer: v4viper Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/12/2007 - 07:24 am Title: The Shot Heard Around the World

oh is spike going to pay for that look or what smiling to break my face the poor sod stepped in it and doesn't even know it yet enjoying the hit out of the story more please

Reviewer: DK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/12/2007 - 06:00 am Title: The Shot Heard Around the World

Eve was just available, a paid employee. His current situation was his choice and decision. Sorry they didn't get to finish their lovemaking with each other in this chapter, maybe in the next one. Still a great chapter.

Reviewer: Lady Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/12/2007 - 05:27 am Title: The Shot Heard Around the World

Sorry for anything cruel I might have said in the last review! I can't get enough. Looks like there is going to be more drama! Looking foward to the next update.

Author's Response: Ah nah,....nothing cruel was said to hurt my feelings. just giving you all a hard time, hehe. Update will be soon. ^.^

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