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Reviewer: serenity Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2008 - 02:19 am Title: I'm Yours

So happy to see you on the site again! Loved the update, looking forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2008 - 12:38 am Title: I'm Yours

Loved this chapter and the whole fic , i like when Buffy's all hurt and jealous over Spike and it was hot too. What does Dru mean "he made a pact with an evil man , is it Hank ? And did she say it will cost William his life ,I don't like that . I know you can't tell me , anyway I hope you update soon, i've been following this fic from it's first posting.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2008 - 11:26 pm Title: I'm Yours

Lolx. That was a pretty funny ending. I think she needed that though. When Drusilla said his life, did she literally mean his life or did she mean his lifestyle? Can't wait to find out!!!

Reviewer: B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2008 - 11:03 pm Title: I'm Yours

Yay for updates! Can't wait to see what happends next.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2008 - 11:00 pm Title: I'm Yours

Wonderful chapter! Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: flyingnicole Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2008 - 09:13 pm Title: I'm Yours

this is my first time reading this and I love this story! Keep coming with the updates

Reviewer: dee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2008 - 08:32 pm Title: I'm Yours

i loved this chapter...please hurry and update again soon. i hope more spuffy lovin' is to come :)

keep up the great work!

Reviewer: Ivana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2008 - 07:16 pm Title: I'm Yours

OMG!!! I love this chapter! love the fact that Drusilla is Spike's sister. and can't wait for Rupert to come to LA!!! and for us to meet Jenny at least!!!
hope this means you'll update soon!!!

Reviewer: foreveralways Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2008 - 03:09 pm Title: I'm Yours

WOWOWOWOWOWOWOOWOWOWOWOOOOOOOW
i've been wating for that for months...i cannot wait till giles and spikes family get involved....you write so wellll. i absolutely loved it. please update soon.

Reviewer: u2fan2005 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2008 - 02:13 pm Title: I'm Yours

I swear i was just reading this fic last night and wondering if you'd update. I must have magic powers or something when i found to my surprise you updated. :) Update again soon. I think later i'll reread everything again to refresh my memory with the story. And I wonder what Giles will think of Buffy. I don't think he'll like the deal that was made without his involvement but i think he'd like Buffy as a person and accept things. But then again, he's probably believing that Buffy is a danger towards William.

Reviewer: letitia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2008 - 01:34 pm Title: I'm Yours

OMG!!!!!!! I was so excited when I saw this chapter. I just love this story and I have from the very first word. Buffy is just a woman fall for a man that she is scared to care for. And Spike is learning (I think) what is means to really BE with someone. And she was just SO jealous of Eve. I am glad that they had at least one day of just happiness. And for them to be caught by Joyce and Hank was just too much. I really hope that Dru can get them some help before it is too late. I know that Spike didn't tell his father about the deal but maybe Dru can help smooth the way. Just an AWESOME awesome chapter.

Reviewer: charlotte Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/07/2007 - 04:42 pm Title: The Shot Heard Around the World

HEY please up date soon. i wondered if you'd considered introducing spikes parents. just a thought .
loved the fic

bye

Author's Response: Hello, hopefully I'll be up be updating with a new chapter soon. But I plan to introduce Spike's parents/family later in the story. Thanks for the suggestion though.

Reviewer: carolina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/20/2007 - 01:58 am Title: The Shot Heard Around the World

plz update SOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Author's Response: Wow. I'll be updating soon, hopefully. Sorry for the wait.

Reviewer: charzy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2007 - 04:44 pm Title: The Shot Heard Around the World

please update soon !!!!!!

Reviewer: sexiespikelover Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/19/2007 - 11:45 pm Title: The Shot Heard Around the World

Poor Buffy! She's not getting very settled in Spike's world huh? And to top it off, Eve? Poor Buffy! Keep up the Spuffy goodness!

Reviewer: Serenity Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/16/2007 - 03:17 am Title: The Shot Heard Around the World

GAH! Must read more, now! Really enjoyed this chapter. Can't wait to find out what Buffy says to Spike about Eve; not to mention the family dinner with her parents and Dawn. Why do I feel like the phrase "Dum Da Da Dum..." needs to be placed at the end of this installment?

Reviewer: letitia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/16/2007 - 01:54 am Title: The Shot Heard Around the World

Okay I finally got a chance to sit down and read. I absolutely loved the chapter. Buffy and Spike shared something intimate and it ws ended way too soon. And now she knows what was going on. I really do hope that she can handle this. And to now see why Kendra and Eve were giving her the evil eye. She had to know that Spike got around before she showed up... And I just love how Faith and Buffy talk to each other. I hope she realizes that she is really not alone.

Reviewer: Verda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/16/2007 - 12:57 am Title: The Shot Heard Around the World

Another update, thank you so much. To bad Spike gave Eve the same look he'd givin Buffy. That won't make her feel any better about him. Jealous maybe but that's a lot different then giving into his desires, knowing he looks the same way at another woman. This won't help Buffy convince her mother that she's there because she wants to be, earlier maybe, doubtful now.

I hope you find a beta soon. A great chapter, thanks.

Reviewer: pixiecorn Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/13/2007 - 10:26 am Title: The Shot Heard Around the World

ooo interesting.....i loved this chapter:) cant wait for the next update...hope more is to come soon

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/13/2007 - 04:56 am Title: The Shot Heard Around the World

Power packed chapter with war being declared and unknown rivals of the feminine kind revealed. Buffy feeling jealous after Spike all but put his stamp of ownership on her in front of the family only to find out that his regular sleep buddy is in the crowd giving her the death glare must have her off balance and feeling awkward. Faith really doesn't pull any punches when it comes to answering questions and at least she stood next to Buffy after Spike left her side during the meeting. Really looking forward to more chapters.

Reviewer: Dee81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/13/2007 - 12:16 am Title: The Shot Heard Around the World

Two chapters in one week...I feel spoiled ;)

I'm glad that you didn't have Buffy and Spike go all the way yet. It just leads up more to the sexual tension, and I like the fact that Buffy and Spike are emotionally becoming closer.

I'm looking forward to finding out the role that Eve will be playing, and how the gang will be handling the fact that the mafia war has just gotten a lot more dangerous. I'm worried about Spike, Faith, Xander, etc but that's mainly because you do such fabulous job at writing these characters in this type of story.

Great work. I can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Thanks so much. Yeah, I really plan to not rush them into the actual wild bunny act for awhile, I feel like letting that sexual tension cook for awhile until it boils.

Reviewer: Brittany Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/12/2007 - 11:45 pm Title: The Shot Heard Around the World

YOU ABSOLUTLY HAVE TO UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!! I ***NEED*** to know what happens!!!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/12/2007 - 11:22 pm Title: The Shot Heard Around the World

Things are starting to heat up! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/12/2007 - 11:20 pm Title: The Shot Heard Around the World

Porn lite if you ask me ;) So everything is speeding up. and uh-oh, Eve.

Reviewer: anon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/12/2007 - 08:41 pm Title: The Shot Heard Around the World

oh shoot. can't wait for more.

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