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Reviewer: Shez Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/12/2007 - 02:58 pm Title: The Shot Heard Around the World

Wow great chapter, I loved the scene in the dance studio and Buffy's jealousy, look forward to another chapter of this fantastic story.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/12/2007 - 01:56 pm Title: The Shot Heard Around the World

Oh man...this is not good. It's not good at all. Buffy is not gonna be happy. I would not be happy if he looked at another girl like that after just spending that time with me. Poor Buffy.

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/12/2007 - 12:48 pm Title: The Shot Heard Around the World

OH can't wait for the next chapter, I know he really didn't do anything wrong , butwhat he did made me mad. I think he needs a little bit of the cold shoulder for this, and he won't even know why. Update soon please ,please , please.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/12/2007 - 09:00 am Title: The Shot Heard Around the World

Oh, confrontation.. and a little jealousy..

Enjoyed..

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/12/2007 - 08:50 am Title: The Shot Heard Around the World

Oh that was good, bring in a little loving and then a crisis and and ex bed buddy and Buffy gets upset, does she think he is still doing that.

More please.

Reviewer: jamies_lady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/12/2007 - 07:27 am Title: The Shot Heard Around the World

oh dear, spike is going one step forward and three back, and what is Joyce going to say? she's not stupid!!
looking forward to more and so glad you are updating this one

Reviewer: v4viper Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/12/2007 - 07:24 am Title: The Shot Heard Around the World

oh is spike going to pay for that look or what smiling to break my face the poor sod stepped in it and doesn't even know it yet enjoying the hit out of the story more please

Reviewer: DK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/12/2007 - 06:00 am Title: The Shot Heard Around the World

Eve was just available, a paid employee. His current situation was his choice and decision. Sorry they didn't get to finish their lovemaking with each other in this chapter, maybe in the next one. Still a great chapter.

Reviewer: Lady Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/12/2007 - 05:27 am Title: The Shot Heard Around the World

Sorry for anything cruel I might have said in the last review! I can't get enough. Looks like there is going to be more drama! Looking foward to the next update.

Author's Response: Ah nah,....nothing cruel was said to hurt my feelings. just giving you all a hard time, hehe. Update will be soon. ^.^

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/11/2007 - 02:01 am Title: Dance With Me

"Spike..." indeed. Don't leave us in suspense for too long. And can we just kill Angelus now and be done with it....No? oh well, I guess it would pretty much ruin the rest of the tale wouldn't it. OK, keep him for now, but I look foward to a long painful, bloody death for him in the future. Excellent chap. Loved the "dancing" more please.

Reviewer: Verda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/10/2007 - 04:16 pm Title: Dance With Me

Bad, bad girl but it's an update, so I can't be all that upset about it. I had no doubt that in this fic, Spike would remain a mafia boss, hence, the title of your story. It's how they find their way toward a successful relationship, that I'm interested in seeing. I'm hoping that Angelus' obsession with her being a "virgin" will soon be resolved. She might not hold as much of his attention, once he sees she no longer holds that title, making all of us a bit happier. Nice detail with her poster. That's one way to help melt a girl's heart! Looking forward to more, thanks sweetie.

Reviewer: Emily Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/10/2007 - 09:36 am Title: Dance With Me

omg thankyou!!!!!!!!!! this is my fav WIP at the moment i check for updates everyday!!! you just made my day with another explosive chapter!!!!!!!!i hope you know just how appreciated your work is! thanyou so much and i cant wait until your next update!

Author's Response: Thank you, you're very sweet. I estimate my next update to either be tomorrow or sunday. I'll be working 'dilligently' on it today for four hours before I go to work, so when I get off all I would have to do is finish it up. But there will be an update soon. ^.^

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/10/2007 - 03:26 am Title: Dance With Me

I like the dance they are doing together, I love the surprise Spike gave to Buffy and I really hate Angelus and Darla plotting against them. I hope that some ballet kicks will also be good for self defense if need be. Look forward to more, bad place to leave this chapter in *glares*.

Reviewer: Dee81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/10/2007 - 12:41 am Title: Dance With Me

I'm -so- happy to see this updated! It's one of my favorite stories on this site :)

Great chapter. I enjoyed Buffy's conversation with Xander and I'm glad to see Spike and Buffy getting closer. Yet, I love how cautious and hesitant she is around him due to the nature of his job. I'm just wondering now if they're going to continue what they were doing in the dance studio...

Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Brittany Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2007 - 06:09 pm Title: Dance With Me

You could give the devil lessons on being EVIL!!!!!!

Reviewer: Lady Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2007 - 07:00 am Title: Dance With Me

You cruel, cruel ... grrr. I love this story! I have been waiting for this chapter. I knew it was coming. Spike is so sweet, giving her, her own dance room (whatever it is called) So sweet. I can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: pixiecorn Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2007 - 03:33 am Title: Dance With Me

lol evil ending.....i cant wait for the next update:)

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2007 - 01:05 am Title: Dance With Me

Ugh, Angelus. But Spike is so sweet, making her her own studio and getting her that poster. Aww.

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2007 - 11:48 pm Title: Dance With Me

Wow , was so glad to see this update, this is one of my favorite stories, i liked that Xander told her something positive about Spike, have more scenes like that. Buffy is still seeing things in Black and White, instead of Grey being exposed to that freak Angel will probably change that if yu intend that to happen. Your a wicked girl for leaving off where yu did , please update soon.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2007 - 11:28 pm Title: Dance With Me

Wonderful chapter! Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2007 - 09:31 pm Title: Dance With Me

O that was mean!!! Where's the rest????

Author's Response: Haha the rest will come over the weekend. When I create cliff hangers I try not to leave you guys hanging for so long.

Reviewer: mag-rose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2007 - 09:05 pm Title: Dance With Me

So pleased you've updated. How wonderful that Spike has had a Dance Studio built for Buffy. The poster was an inspired idea. I was shocked about the girl that Angelus abused. Is she anyone Spike would know?

Reviewer: messy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2007 - 08:58 pm Title: Dance With Me

Sometimes I think you might be eviler than Angelus, living us with this kind of cliff hanger; expecially when Spuffy is involved ^-^
But I love you and your works too much and I'm too faithfull; so, I wait patiently for your next update ;-)

take care and write fast,
a very greedy reader :P

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2007 - 08:17 pm Title: Dance With Me

Oh I love it, I wonder who said the name, Buffy or someone else.

Reviewer: fabi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2007 - 08:15 pm Title: Dance With Me

please i hope you update soon you are evil but i keep loving your fic, so what a way to go.

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