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Reviewer: huh? Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/10/2006 - 09:58 am Title: What Really Happened?

Uh, you need a beta for your grammer and phrasing. I'm just wondering why no one tore into Andrew for hiding Spike's return, and instead let Andrew reprimand them? A little too unrealistic, some loopholes here and there, but if you get a good beta to read through your fics 1st, I believe you will become a good writer.

Author's Response: I really appreciate your honest criticism and I thank you for it. I did have a beta but she failed to continue after 7/8th chapter so I had to go on without her. I apologize for the grammatical mistakes as English is my 2nd language and not the 1st. And as for Andrew, many people made mistakes. Like Spike not telling, Angel not telling etc. And everyone knows Andrew cared about Spike. So when he lashed on, nobody objected it as everyone felt some kind of guilt over what Spike said. Atleast that is what my POV of the situation was. You might notice that Andrew didn't play a big part after the battle. So maybe in the sequel I can tie up that loophole.

Reviewer: Wolfram_and_Hart Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2006 - 09:25 pm Title: What Really Happened?

Nice work.

Author's Response: Thanks again mate. Keep giving ur feedbacks.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2006 - 09:02 pm Title: What Really Happened?

Glad Buffy and Willow found out what had happened to Spike. Hopefully in time they can help him. Really loved Andrew in this chapter! Loved it!

Author's Response: Thanks for being so great. I hope Andrew is acceptable as he is shown. Wait and see what happens.

Reviewer: spikesangel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2006 - 03:53 pm Title: What Really Happened?

yes, they know what is going on and hopefully they can fix it. i mean how can you help him understand that all that wasn't real. I loved Andrew. I always thought he was such a great character just from having his whole Spike is my hero. great update and i am thrilled w/ this chapter.i hope the next one is soon.

Author's Response: Thanks for the great review. You have been a constant fan and I am grateful for that. I will try to keep it interesting.

Reviewer: Laura Liz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2006 - 01:25 pm Title: What Really Happened?

i liked andrew in this chapter, it fit him well...

more please!

Author's Response: Glad u liked him. I was worried whether people will accept him.

Author's Response: I would like to let you know that I have updated the story and I would really appreciate your reviews. I hope I haven't lost an interesting reader because of my delays in updating. Please read and review. And if you like my writing, add me into your favourite authors to get an alert about my other WIPs which I will release soon.

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